soundwave abuse fanfiction

What kind of unprofessional military is this? Tons of physical abuse, threats, massive incompetence, and insubordination all over the place. Also looks like fanfiction from other series too?

Later chapters are rushed, sentences are very short and more like shortcuts, Like Shockwave cruel bloodthirsty, Megatron established HQ here, the writing style is being direct and plain like when describing someone ex. Soundwave cunning, cruel, sound and ears of decepticons.

Well I read your first fanfic and I loved it to death. I read this and I am going to be honest. I don’t like it, but I will still give you 5 stars. I just hope she and Soundwave make up as I loved their bond.

An excellent hunter x hunter fanfiction. The hatsu are incredibly well done too. So many authors just take it as if just any conditions will suffice when creating a hatsu and that they can abuse loopholes. To me, nen doesn't work like that, so well done.

I dropped at chapter 1 due to authors/ translators writing. Wont list mistakes but simple thing of hearing something immediately before soundwave reaches you is stupid Mc is fighting something not made clear, allys getting massacred by something called death wave or something then goes on to say that mc is that death wave didnt make sense