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Raising My Children With My Personal Spatial Ability

When she woke up, she had transmigrated into An Jiuyue, a woman living with two young children on a mountain after her husband abandoned her. She was pushed to the ground, and now, there was a bloody wound on her head. With only a handful of rice left in the rice bag, she had relied on digging wild vegetables to satisfy their hunger every day. Her children were so often starved that they were all skin and bones. On top of that, a wicked woman threatened her to sell her son! If she refused, the woman would snatch him away forcefully. But An Jiuyue took a deep breath, revealed her sharp claws, beat the woman up, and threw her out of the house. She could show the woman she was not to be messed with! They were out of rice and vegetables now, but she was not afraid. Acquiring food using her spatial abilities was as easy as curling her fingers! Moreover, her spatial abilities were unlimited, and her medical skills did not deteriorate. She could no doubt earn money and raise her children well! As for her ex-husband… The prince, who had returned from the battlefield, smiled maliciously. "My beloved concubine, please calm down. I brought back a mountain of gold from the battlefield as a gift for you and our children."

Slightly Attractive · Urban

Having children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wife

Lu Chen transmigrated to the Great Sum Dynasty, becoming the Ninth Prince of the dynasty. Unlike the transmigrators in novels, Lu Chen didn't have extensive engineering knowledge, nor did he remember much classical poetry. In order to avoid getting involved in the succession struggle, Lu Chen could only lie low, planning to enjoy a quiet life of splendor and wealth. Due to his mother's status, Lu Chen was eventually granted a marriage by the Emperor and was assigned to be Prince over a bitterly cold territory in the north. Just when Lu Chen thought he was going to decay in such a manner for the rest of his life, he activated a system on his wedding night. As long as he sired a heir, Lu Chen would be able to receive rewards and even enhance his own power. Years later. Lu Chen marched into the capital with a million-strong army to support the Emperor, and everyone was dumbfounded. "Wasn't this guy a useless Prince? Where did he get a million-strong army from!" "What's happening, how could he possibly be a Grandmaster?" "Turns out the Ninth Prince's decadence was all an act!" ...

Summer fades into autumn. · Eastern

God´s Eyes

Losing his parent early on, he had to survive in a world he couldn't even see... Blind and left alone, he was seen as a parasite by the social hierarchy of the new ages filled with martial arts and soulbonds Forced to mature early his train of thought was different from his peers as he didn´t mind derogatory reviews about him. The day he awoke his soul was the day he cried in desperation while God played tricks with him as his soul-awakening was a blessing in disguise. Nobody would have ever imagined that he was neither blind nor a parasite until the final moment, he opened his golden eyes that flickered brightly, eagerly waiting to devour everyone daring to obstruct his path towards the summit. Follow Jason on his adventurous journey throughout the vast universe filled with miraculous sceneries and mysterious beings. Some readers might not like information, but I do! ------ Discord-server= https://discord.gg/EdsDgFVWwZ *This is my first novel, please bear that in mind. I appreciate all kinds of sincere advice and comments* ------

HideousGrain · Urban

Defy The Alpha(s)

Two centuries after the Great War, peace between humans and werewolves was finally achieved, or so everyone believes. Werewolves reign like gods, and humans remain blissfully unaware of their true place in the new world order. To maintain this fragile balance, each year, a handful of "lucky" humans are selected from various districts to attend Lunaris Academy, a prestigious institution that promises glory, status, and a chance to mingle with the elite. Those chosen are hailed as the lucky few, destined to marry powerful alphas and rise as luna. This year, Violet Purple is among the chosen, much to everyone's surprise. For an orphaned girl adopted by a disgraced prostitute, this is a golden ticket to a better life or so she's told. But Lunaris Academy isn’t the paradise it’s painted to be. Everything Violet and her fellow humans have been taught is a lie. Humans are far from equal; they're pawns in a much larger game. The academy is nothing but a gilded cage, and the students are lambs led to slaughter, playthings for the alphas to toy with in their ruthless games. To make matters worse, Violet catches the attention of the most dangerous players in this game, the Terror Four: the Alpha of the North, Alpha of the South, Alpha of the East, and Alpha of the West. Each one is more dangerous, more twisted, and more powerful than the last. But even among themselves, the alphas are divided, each with their own deadly ambitions. Yet, they all have their eyes on her. They expect Violet to play along, to fall in line like the others who worship at their feet, to break under their games. But Violet isn’t like the others. She refuses to bow. She’ll defy them all.

Glimmy · Fantasy

Défier Les Alpha(s)

Deux siècles après la Grande Guerre, la paix entre les humains et les loups-garous a finalement été atteinte, du moins tout le monde le croit. Les loups-garous règnent comme des dieux, et les humains restent dans une ignorance bienheureuse de leur véritable place dans le nouvel ordre mondial. Pour maintenir cet équilibre fragile, chaque année, une poignée d'humains "chanceux" sont sélectionnés dans divers districts pour assister à l'Académie Lunaris, une institution prestigieuse qui promet gloire, statut et une chance de côtoyer l'élite. Ceux qui sont choisis sont acclamés comme les quelques chanceux, destinés à épouser de puissants alphas et à s'élever en tant que luna. Cette année, Violet Purple est parmi les élus, à la surprise de tous. Pour une fille orpheline adoptée par une prostituée déshonorée, c'est un ticket en or pour une vie meilleure ou du moins c'est ce qu'on lui dit. Mais l'Académie Lunaris n'est pas le paradis qu'on décrit. Tout ce que Violet et ses camarades humains ont appris est un mensonge. Les humains sont loin d'être égaux ; ils sont des pions dans un jeu bien plus vaste. L'académie n'est rien de plus qu'une cage dorée, et les étudiants sont des agneaux menés à l'abattoir, des jouets pour les alphas dans leurs jeux impitoyables. Pour aggraver les choses, Violet attire l'attention des joueurs les plus dangereux dans ce jeu, les Quatre Terreurs : l'Alpha du Nord, l'Alpha du Sud, l'Alpha de l'Est et l'Alpha de l'Ouest. Chacun est plus dangereux, plus tordu et plus puissant que le précédent. Mais même entre eux, les alphas sont divisés, chacun poursuivant ses propres ambitions mortelles. Pourtant, ils ont tous les yeux rivés sur elle. Ils s'attendent à ce que Violet suive le mouvement, tombe dans les rangs comme les autres qui vénèrent à leurs pieds, qu'elle casse sous leurs jeux. Mais Violet n'est pas comme les autres. Elle refuse de s'incliner. Elle va tous les défier.

Glimmy · Fantasy

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Echoes_of_Sorrow

2021-07-03

For me it's a first, it's the first time I found a story with absolutely 0 punctuation, sometimes there's a capital letter, like 1 or 2 per chapters. I didn't even try to read it to see if the story was good, mediocre or bad, the absence of punctuation put this story directly in the lowest rating possible. When I say 0 punctuation it's reaaly 0 punctuation, I checked several chapters and there's not a single dot or comma, it's absolutely unreadable...

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DaoistWsow5U

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It’s ok . The story is good . The pace is good toy however it’s very hard to read or use the audio function for this story. Author please use proper punctuation! Yuri sometimes have sentences that go on and on and on and on. Please fix it. It’s super horrible reading it/ listening it when sometimes (90% or the time) it seems the dialogue is super fast because there are no commas! Discribtions also need commas. I Can appreciate it not being AI, but the punctuation is horrible. If it weren’t for the punctuation (or lack of) it would be a 4.0 star story easily

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Habab

2023-10-12

I genuinely love the concept behind this, and the story in general. The reason for the 4-stars instead of 5, however, is the author's lack of proper punctuation. There are a great deal of run on sentences, and not nearly enough punctuation to even everything out.

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Mao_Yuxuan

2020-12-04

As far as I read, the story is impressive. I like the story development. I love the character development. It's just that for punctuation, perhaps it could be improved a little bit (although I also struggled with punctuation). Besides that, overall is Great! Keep it up!

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Related Questions

A Short History of Punctuation Story: What are the Key Milestones in the History of Punctuation?

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2024-11-07 14:29

The history of punctuation has several important milestones. In ancient times, texts were often written without much punctuation, which made them difficult to read and interpret. As civilizations developed, the need for clearer communication led to the creation of basic punctuation marks. The full stop or period was essential for indicating the end of a thought. Commas then emerged to break up sentences into more manageable parts. Punctuation continued to evolve, with the development of marks like the colon, which can be used to introduce a list or an explanation. This evolution of punctuation has been crucial in making written language more precise and easier to understand.

Punctuation in The Little Mermaid Story

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2024-12-03 06:13

Punctuation in 'The Little Mermaid' story is crucial for understanding. The use of colons and semicolons can also be found. A colon might be used to introduce something important, like when the sea witch is about to list the terms of the deal she offers to the Little Mermaid. Semicolons can connect related ideas, perhaps when the author is describing two aspects of the mermaid's life that are different but related, like her love for her underwater family; her longing for the surface world. Without proper punctuation, the story would be a jumbled mess and the beauty and meaning of the tale could be lost.

A Short History of Punctuation Story: How Has Punctuation Evolved Over Time?

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Punctuation has come a long way. In early writing, such as on clay tablets, there was hardly any punctuation. It was mainly just strings of words. As languages developed, people started to use basic signs like dots and short lines to separate words or groups of words. As writing became more literary and complex, the need for a more sophisticated system of punctuation grew. The modern set of punctuation marks we know today, including the various types of brackets, apostrophes, etc., has been gradually developed over centuries. Each new mark was added to make written language more precise, to show relationships between words and clauses, and to convey different tones and meanings.

The Function of Punctuation

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2025-03-18 20:45

Punctuation is a special character used to separate sentences and paragraphs.The use of punctuations in novel reading can help readers better understand the text and avoid ambiguity. The following are some common uses of punctuations: 1. Comma: used to separate sentences and passages. Commas can be used to separate two short sentences or two long sentences, but they are usually used in short sentences to make the sentence flow more smoothly. 2. Period: used to end a sentence and mark where the sentence ends. A full stop is usually placed at the end of a sentence to emphasize the main point of the sentence. 3. Semicolon: used to add a terminator between two short sentences. Semicolons can be used to connect two parallel sentences or to divide long sentences into several parts. Colon: used to add a terminator before a word or phrase. Colons can be used to emphasize words or phrases or to break up long sentences. 5. Exclamation mark: used at the end of a sentence to express an exclamation or emphasis. Exclamation marks are usually used to express surprise, anger, or joy. 6. Quoting marks: used to quote external text such as news reports, academic papers, etc. The quote marks can surround the original text and display the quoted content. The use of punctuations can help readers better understand the text and avoid ambiguity. In writing a novel, you can flexibly use punctuations according to the needs of the plot and the style of writing to improve the legibility of the text.

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2025-03-11 04:08

Punctuation is a small symbol used to separate sentences, passages, and text content. It plays an important role in novel writing. Punctuation marks can play the following roles: 1. Separating sentences: Punctuation marks can be used to separate sentences to make them clearer and easier for readers to understand. Separating Paragons: Punctuation marks can be used to separate the paragraph so that the reader can understand the structure and content of the article more easily. Punctuation can be used to emphasize the tone, making it more vivid and more attractive to the reader. 4. emoji: Punctuation can also be used to express emoji to make the article more vivid and make it easier for readers to understand the mood of the character. Punctuation was very important in writing a novel. It could improve the legibility and attractiveness of the article.

Rebirth, Countercurrent, Peak of Chinese Entertainment

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Ancient farm, I rely on raising children to become a group pet

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