sauron fanfic

Why did this chapter feel a bit similar to what Sauron did with Saruman n Denethor? I dunno who the Sauron of this series would be but it seems like Zero would be someone like Denethor n Saruman

it was a like a year ago I also saw a fanfiction where it was set in 40K a girl was reborn as Sauron and she did conquer Middle Earth and the valar were actually Eldar and this new Sauron was actually a Primark of the 2nd Legion "the Dark Lords Legion" and the orcs goblins and elves was abumons and the red eye of Sauron was actually taken to use is the eye of Tarra like sanguineous and Horus wear Horus find sauron's world comes down to meet her little bit later Big E shows up at Barad-dûr and while she has pristine white skin golden eyes and white hair and is 10 ft tall her Sons have gray skin with black and gold eyes it's really a shame it never got more than 18 chapters

bad geammar. defiant lore power like system cheat is like insulting thousand years trained elves. it brokes the world and makes the world threat less threatening. sauron will be a joke fighting vs sytem-emon user. same this will be another ring of power, but even ring of power doesnt create power which directly deny the LOTR lore and power balance. fanfic which not worthy of LOTR masterpiece

This fanfic is already complete on the raw as the authors notes at the end, the middle of the story it becomes a bit boring but for a 1st story its good enough, in the. middle the progression of power kinda stalls but its a correct decision considering how trully powerful a realistic Steve is. the respawn feature that is foreshadowed is wasted and not used really sauron as the antagonist is bland in this story. what autor did really good is the highlight of time passing to mc overall good enough read