kylo and rey fanfiction

Usually I don't give low rating, I just stop reading the story altogether, but I wasted my time on this, went in with great expectations, but was ultimately disappointed. The story was acceptable until chapter 10. Then MC killed Rey. And that was it for me. How could Kylo Ren not convince Rey to join him? It makes no sense! Rey may had been a Jedi, but she had no prejudice against dark side force users like other Jedis. This was not what that movie was even about. Even if he couldn't convince her to join him, Jedi were already finished. Yoda himself burns down the temple in the last movie, there was no need to kill Rey, or Luke, who was just quietly living out the rest of his life in peace. Author lacks sufficient imagination required to become a writer, or the proper understanding of the characters. And this has nothing to do with English not being the first language.

I was sad to see Rhett die in the end. I thought only his blood relative could kill him. I was hoping that Rhett and Kylo could reconnect and Kylo find a new mate…. Overall, good story.

Thanks author for the story. 1. Firstly the choice and theme of this story is great imaginative and creative of two humans got entangled in their body swap. 2. Embeded values allows readers to learn as they e.g goodness drawn from this is KyLo and Vad managed to use their own lense to assess and deal / handle each other’s situation using their own thinking. So Vad coukd use his advantages and maturing to deal and solution for Kylo being victimise as a bully and Kylo apply her softer view into mending conflicts and situation that Vad had to deal with his best friend / buddies etc 3. character building done subtky through conversations allowing readers to understand their thoughts and how they will react to situations Keep up the good work author - look forward to see if Kylo can get to the bottom of the sea to unlock and return back their state as how Osca hinted. Great humour in between and choice of words!

Ceritanya bagus banget ka,pengorbanan Dira untuk kesembuhan Rey. Walaupun tidak bersama Rey,tapi setidaknya dia berjuang untuk menyelamatkan hidupnya Rey. Semangat terus yah ka💪💪