aomine daiki x kise ryouta fanfic

i like the concept of mc having god speed impulse ability like agon kongo plus perfect copy like kise ryouta, and author make the best combination from it.

Interesting idea to put Aomine Daiki in the world of Slam Dunk, which has been missing for a long time. Just try to soften the description of the girls, it gives me goosebumps sometimes.

Good job. I like where this is going, especially how you've improved upon and expanded Aomine's character; not to mention the relationship you made between Daiki and Haizaki. Just continue to update and show us the power of Haizaki!

It’s not much yet I do see potential BUT a lot of random Chinese names and name mismatches (like calling momoi may) and probs others which I can’t remember at the moment, i don’t know i f this update stability will stay as it is right now but it’s quite a lot of chapters in a short amount of time which i do quite like, they don’t go much into the background but the story IS just starting so it’s somewhat understandable, character design so far is fairly bad, from the point I’m at right now story development seems fairly unique but i could be wrong. Overall seems like a translated Chinese fanfic.

alright hurray for a new KNB fic however its getting annoying how the author fails to incorporate the MC to the miracles group. the story has this emphasis that he needs to belong and stuff like that but dude is now a starter or a first stringer, he can beat kise, challenge aomine but still keeps repeating on " i need to belong " . another thing about this is that there has been no introduction about the MC. whats his height, position, physical appearance like wtf does he play 1 to 5 ?. also smells heavy on AI.