Douluo: Phoenix God Descends, Emperor Flame Burns the Heavens
Lin Xiao transmigrated to Douluo, awakening the same martial soul as Ma Hongjun, the Evil Fire Phoenix.
Flender brought Ma Hongjun to find Lin Xiao, wanting to take him to seek pleasure, but Lin Xiao firmly refused, preferring to endure the pain of the evil fire burning his body, and would never let himself fall.
Sighing, Flender left with Ma Hongjun.
Many years later.
Encountering Lin Xiao again, Flender was surprised to find that he was still alive, while Ma Hongjun was jealous of Lin Xiao's handsome appearance, which was like the difference between clouds and mud.
Shui Binger: "Lin Xiao, if I hold you, will you not be hot?"
Ma Hongjun: "We're both phoenixes, why is Lin Xiao's fire so much more powerful than mine?"
Tang San: "My Blue Silver Grass breaks with a single burn? What's the difference between this and a broken hemp rope!"
Tang Hao: "It's bad! This Clear Sky Hammer feels a bit hot to hold! I can't control it!"
The Fire Phoenix's reputation resounded throughout the continent. This time, it was no longer under the name of evil fire, but in a sacred posture, displayed before the eyes of the world.
(Female lead tentatively Shui Binger, will add more depending on the situation, doesn't follow the group, abuses Tang San)
geriatricvibes · Anime & Comics
The story plot is definitely interesting, it's giving me a lot of Phoenix wright ace attorney vibes, since they're very similar. The only thing that needs some work is the grammar. Everything else is perfect.