can the narrator be a character in a story

This book is really amazing. It gives us specific details about each event. To be honest, my favorite character is Khody. I enjoy this character because, he is very protective over the narrator, he loves the narrator, shows his love and effection towards the narrator, and he supports every decision that is made by the narrator. My second favorite character is Molly. I like this character because, she loves the narrator, has their ups and downs in their friendship, shows love and effection, always is honest and has to have her opinion spoken whether it’s good or bad.

I love the multiple-narrator technique, as it helps connect with each character. The good only had a few chapters, but reading through them, I can tell the story would be adventure packed.

The narrator takes the form of a tree on a hill, and tells of the various people and events they see. Plot wise it is more of a sightseeing tour of character building rather than a gripping tale of action, although it still can be seen as an adventure. Years and lives pass the narrator by, leaving strong impressions on both narrator and reader. Although the author sometimes trips over the english language, they wield it with the skill of a poet. Beautiful sentences and descriptions illustrate the story without relying on overinflated words and phrases. If you want to take a slow stroll down a story, choose this one.

Nice work. I enjoyed it. Good world building, character set up and other aspect. But you seem a bit confused are you using a first person narrator is a third person narrator?

The story concept is incredibly interesting, but sometimes the writing can be a little clunky. Luckily, not very often. Roman is a likeable character and, while I think his character could be explored more through his actions and not as much through the narrator telling us, I get the sense that he will continue to be a strong figure in this story.