can't hear sound on ig stories

It's good but it feels weird to read. The dialogue doesn't sound like something I'd ever hear in real life though. It feels scripted. Something feels wrong with it. I can't quite identify it but besides that it's pretty good story.

Some parts seem off. The big one is the MC has sound magic and can hear people arguing over a kilometers away; can even hear someone's muscles moving or hear magic being used... Gets snuck up on consecutively fighting monsters that he did not hear. Other than that, how has a government (after what seems to be a couple of generations of magic users- hard to tell, seems like older adults in the story have had magic and adapted weapons for it, but not explicitly said) not learned how to weaponize sound. Weaponizing things is what the government is good at. They were able to figure out sound and space, but not sound. Other than that the characters seem a bit hollow. I know I am only at chapter 20, but they seem strait forward with no twists, just here is their personality they do not really hid their intentions until later, you know right away, they let it show to other characters as soon as the slightest inconvenience to their personal preferences are gone against.

I haven't read it yet, but I wanted to leave it here: I was thinking about how to let silence be strong before I read it and I thought, what if it removes the concept of silence in an area? Like silence can be the opposite of “noise” or the sound of everything and even thoughts for those who listen to some sound in life, like when you think about something you think with your voice or someone's voice or a sound you've already heard. Now think about it this way: if the end of this “noise” means silence, if you remove it, it means the sound of everything can be heard at maximum volume, inside and outside your ear/head, and it won't stop until the silence returns or you die. To conclude, this would basically make the person have hearing like Superman's without being able to contain himself and that of a schizophrenic, because he would hear double (if he spoke, he would hear himself speaking and thinking loudly or he would hear someone on the outside and think loudly on the inside), thus making combat unbearable and leaving the person unfocused, because he cannot drown out, diminish or focus on a single sound (because the latter is a kind of silence).

These stories and their authors can’t seem to write stories without the main characters having pedophilic relationships. They use some excuse as to why they’ve written it that way but it always sound idiotic and brain dead. It’s impossible to like stories like this.

I absolutely love this book can’t wait for more chapters. Cannot wait to hear more of the stories to come. I hope yanee sees that true love can be found.