hermione luna and ginny go back in time fanfiction

One of the better Harry Potter fanfiction where MC isn't OP from start and a love intrest other than Hermione or Ginny which is quite amazing but I think that MC can research some rituals to give a passive boost to his strength

This fanfiction is a mess. The writing is not consistent, contains chinese characters and messed up names and 1 line paragraphs and even multiple pae.tron names here and there and advertise new books inside the fanfiction. It's common to all chinese fanfiction under this user's post where s/he copied from other websites. About the story itself, it is terrible. Here are the reasons: - First 2 years, the mc spends so much time going to professors' offices to learn 1-1. Suddenly in 3rd year, it is no longer mentioned. - First 2 years, he woke up at 4 or 5 to go study, which Hermione couldn't compete. Suddenly in 3rd year, he no longer wakes up early to study anymore (Wood wakes Harry at 5 while mc is still sleeping) - Mc learns so fast to the point it doesn't make sense. He can read multiple books, spend lots of time with classes. and then go to 1-1 learning with professors, then spend time in Forbidden Forrest at night, while still having time to babysit Cedric and Luna for no reason by teaching Cedric Occlumency and cooking with Luna, which he didn't do it with Harry or Ron (he never helped them with assignments either), and yet still have time to go to the owl house to feed his owl, and have time to chat with Neville, and have time to help out professors in needs, and more time to chat with Fred and George and play with their ideas, and also don't forget the time that he jumps into his suitcase to torture the diary and dementors and do research on Lockhart. Also somehow with all of this, he still has time to brew wolfsbane for Lupin. You should get my idea by now. I know this is a fiction world but this is too unrealistic even though it is just fiction. - The event happens and suddenly mc is already prepared for that conveniently. This is so dumb, it shows that the author just goes with the story without the plan. For example: mc meets Hermione's cat in 3rd year and suddenly he can talk to the cat, how? It then mentioned that he conveniently met a dying cat before and learned the language before killing it on the street. Okay!!! Then by the end of the 2nd year, mc talks to Ginny and cares for her, Ginny calls him brother because he plays with her and shows her so many interesting things and even guides her in magic before she joins Hogwarts when mc stays at Wesley's place during the summer, mc also mentions that Fred and George always play with themselves in the backyard and never play with Ginny, but mc does care for her during that time. Meanwhile, the whole summer when mc stays at Ginny's place, he never talks to her, he also plays in the backyard with Fred and George, and in the train on Ginny's first day, Fred and George ask Mc go babysit Ginny and both Ginny and Mc feels awkward to each other. And also it has the storyline that mc predicts the future for Harry, and suddenly it mentions that mc already spend the whole year with divination's professors and he is a true seer ??? The plot keeps changing for mc's convenience and it's a sign of bad fanfiction to me. Oh, and also don't forget mc suddenly becomes so rich even though it never mentions his reward in money. Or multiple spell rewards but he rarely uses it. Or the mc is both dumb and smart at the same time for multiple times. So inconsistent, so terrible.

I like the idea of Harry sharing his time in Hogwarts with Ginny and Luna. Although, the wandless magic threw me off for a bit but seeing as it is mild level magics I suppose that's okay.

The story is trash im not gonna lie the MC is useless at least add something new to the MC like other fanfics with a OC so tis is just another story with a worthless character who is supposed to be the MC but isn't at least if ur gonna do a style like this do it with a character that is already existing and add a POV for like ginny, luna, ron, hermione, or some other background/semiimportant character