ashura yasha fanfic

Kengan ashura and baki grappler? 5 stars 😁😁😁😁 Kengan ashura and baki grappler? 5 stars 😁😁😁😁 Kengan ashura and baki grappler? 5 stars 😁😁😁😁

I'll Surpass the MC started with so much potential, introducing Brangawa as a powerful, strategic figure. However, his progress is derailed by Yasha Zahara—a prideful, self-centered character whose demands and ultimatums make no sense in the context of the story. Instead of supporting Brangawa’s logical decision to marry multiple talented women and build a stronger lineage, Yasha insists on being the only wife. This, despite the fact that other women with 80 or 70 units of Prana could have significantly strengthened his future clan. Instead, Brangawa sacrifices all that potential to cater to Yasha's childish pride. How is this supposed to make sense? Yasha’s selfishness and inability to compromise ultimately led to her own death and the decimation of Brangawa’s clan. Her actions weren’t noble or empowering—they were reckless and destructive. Yet, the story bizarrely frames her pride as a virtue, as though her refusal to allow concubines was something admirable. It wasn’t—it was foolishness, plain and simple. Brangawa, despite his strength and experience, comes across as weak and easily manipulated, repeatedly conceding to Yasha’s irrational ultimatums. For someone with his power and longevity, his willingness to abandon practical decisions for her ego makes no sense. I’ll Surpass the MC ultimately falters by glorifying pride and poor decision-making. Instead of celebrating logic and progress, it sends the wrong message—that selfish pride is a virtue worth destroying everything for. It’s a frustrating read that undermines itself at every turn. apart from this though the book is quite good

From the summary you can tell this fanfic is rubbish beaches rinnegan is not transferable you dumba*s just because you have hashirama's or Madara's chakra since one must have Indra's chakra and Ashura's chakra like how madara was reincarnation of Indra and he took hashirama's cells who had Ashura's chakra so how the hell did they get rinnegan after birth since sarada could have gotten rinnegan from sasuke

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Good novel I hope that when in mondaji the MCs will include Shiro yasha and Halloween As mc woman, It would be great because the setting in NgnL and campione, MC has the spirituality of gods and demon kings