naruto has perfect chakra control fanfiction

Doesn’t make any sense. An academy student somehow beats a chunnin? The hyuga heiress doesn’t have any guards? The MC learns chakra enhanced strength when he has less chakra than an academy student and less chakra control than Naruto.

Well! To be honest, finding a Naruto Fan-fic without naive mc bitching around Naruto also , To find a non-harem one is quite difficult like this one. If you write another Fan-fic on Naruto . Think about these underwhelming but overpowered skills . 1) Memory partition and acceleration 2) Observation haki is OP in Naruto . 3) Perfect chakra control

OK I've read my share of naruto fanfiction and this one is definitely among the best (😑😑at least let's wait for a few more chapters) Like the way Rei is average in everything but Chakra control, I hope is kenjutsu attain mifune echelon when he grows up

The character development is really good, even though it is a bit slow. The depth in the chakra and ninjutsu system is also amazing. It is my favorite naruto fanfiction. Author your books are amazing.

It's a good start overall, I feel. Just remember a slow burn story is driven by character, and I don't feel your mc is interesting enough on his own. Sure, his powers are cool, but that's about it. Put simply, he's a bit of a wuss. Understandable, since he was a regular kid from the real world thrown into a world of killers, but the point stands. In a power fantasy, he's not really interesting enough to drive the story forward. So, I hope the plot is at least decently fast-paced. Next, a bit of constructive feedback to consider. I feel you're a bit too fixated on recreating JJK abilities inside Naruto rather than exploring how Six Eyes can basically cheat the Naruto power system. 1. With his near perfect chakra control and perception of chakra granted by the Six Eyes, he should be able to replicate (not merely imitate like the sharingan) any technique that he witnesses. Limited by his own chakra nature. Though strictly speaking, everyone has all the chakra natures present. Some are simply more dominant than others. Otherwise, hiruzen won't be able to learn all ninjutsu and become the God of Shinobi. Six eyes should be able to negate this limitation. Which leads me to a question: Why is he wasting time with chakra control exercises? And why can't he simply replicate the Gentle Fist? Feels like a forced nerf if you ask me. In essence, he should become the best copy ninja, far better than Kakashi or any Uchiha ever was, really. 2. It's an absurd waste of his perfect control talent to not learn medical ninjutsu. MC even has his aunt to teach him the basics. There shouldn't be an RCT in the Naruto world because, well, there is no CT to begin with. Limitless might be a technique, but since it's innate, it'll be treated like a Kekkei Genkai (bloodline limit). There's no concept in Naruto to reverse a technique to heal yourself because chakra, unlike cursed energy, is not negative energy that can be reversed to create positive energy for healing. Remember, Six Eyes and Limitless have been adapted for Chakra by 'Roshi'. To attain a similar form of constant 100% state of peak Gojo, he'll need to push medical ninjutsu to levels surpassing even Tsunade. Mitotic regeneration is the answer, but it burns through lifespan. Six Eyes can likely improve the technique even further once he learns/steals it from Tsunade. 3. Speaking of domains, I don't really like the idea of domains in Naruto. We know what Unlimited Void can do. Transmitting vast amounts of information into an opponents brain to paralize them. Guess what can transmit information into someone's brain. Genjutsu. He can easily replicate Unlimited Void's effects using Genjutsu. It'll lose the sure hit effect of domains, but it won't even have much of an impact given Genjutsu gives him massive range and flexibility. And 100% suited for him since Genjutsu is for those with excellent chakra control anyway. 4. The MC should be trying to get used to the strain his Six Eyes puts on his brain, at least for a couple hours each day, until his brain stops growing around age 10-14 when brains reach adult size and volume. It would make sure his brain is pressured to actually evolve enough to handle the information load at 100% input for some time rather than just 20% (or whatever the input is while blindfolded). If his peak condition brain can't handle the strain of Six Eyes, constant RCT is useless. So yeah, the MC should look to abuse the perfect chakra control talent he has. There are a few fanfics you can take inspiration from. There's one on webnovel called Naruto: Perfect Control. Then there are two on FFN, Common Sense (excellent notes on abusing the chakra power system), then there's The Honored One, which is basically Naruto with Limitless and Six Eyes. I would recommend reading Common Sense for any Naruto SI fanfic author. Perfect Control for abusing the control Limitless gives you. Lastly, The Honored One simply as a reference for a similar concept. PS: Don't be another generic Naruto fanfic. I see you use a bit of AI, which is fine, but don't outsource your thinking to it as well. Good luck.