whose house burns down in the novel

«She is like a moonlight that beckons into the abyss. Her love is a web woven from jealousy and madness. If you are looking for a yandere whose devotion burns hotter than flame, this book will leave scars on your soul. Dare you touch it?»

I second the man that called this a terribly interesting dumpster fire. I know I should move on, but somehow I find myself on a lawn chair waiting to see how it burns down.

The MC personality is not realistic for an adventure/fantasy setting. She is way to ***** and acts more like someone whose never been outside her house. The process of the characters is slow and the novel updates slowly. The novel has a lot of potential and I hope as the story moves along it'll get better and better.

This a pretty realistic and balanced wish fulfillment story, with Krillin making decent wishes while relatively speaking keeping the balance of the Universe and the Multiverse. The problem I have is when he keeps saying 'I can be relaxed' or 'I can take a break' and his power doesnt really increase for months or a year. Your ass just got kicked by Cooler, whose weaker then King Kold, whose weaker then Cell, whose weaker then Boo, whose weaker them Beerus, whose weaker then Whis, whose weaker than Grand Priest, whose weaker them Zeno, whose probably weaker or at least compared to Dragon God. Not to mention the figure who passed down the Buddah scriptures, or all the other Universes and timelines. Really, it seems like such an inconsistent way to slow down his power gain. Honestly, instead of slowing down the power gain the author can instead give Beerus a trainsformation, or give him MUI. Theres many feasible things that can be done.

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