ahsoka anakin fanfic

Star Wars: The Ends Justify the Means

CDR_Grae

2019-10-06

Very well written and the beginning is very interesting! Good Star Wars fanfiction is very hard to come by, especially in my favorite genre (time travel/reincarnation/etc). Then I see a time travel fic with Ahsoka as the MC and I'm so excited. Hope she can fix what went wrong with Anakin as well as the clones. Good work!

Star Wars Fixing Mistakes

User388 · Others

3 Chs

GOULA

2025-07-03

This fanfic is not just a failure — it’s an open insult to everything Anakin Skywalker stands for. The author has clearly missed the entire emotional core of Star Wars and instead turned a complex, tragic character into a shallow, power-hungry warlord whose heart can be swayed by the first alien woman who offers him a throne. You have the audacity to show Anakin’s perfect dream — his mother alive, Padmé and the children safe, Obi-Wan at peace, Ahsoka still a Jedi — and then you make him throw that all away in the same chapter just because some DC war empress says, “Let’s rule the galaxy together.” That’s not a twist — that’s character assassination. Padmé’s love, Anakin’s fall, the weight of his pain — all of that is tossed aside like garbage. You didn’t write Darth Vader. You wrote an edgy OC in a helmet. The writing is shallow, the emotional beats are nonexistent, and the tone is closer to fan service than storytelling. Even Maxima is reduced to a plot device — a cheap “Padmé replacement” with none of the depth, only used to prop up Vader as a romantic fantasy. This isn’t dark. This isn’t tragic. It’s a parody of power fantasies wrapped in stolen Star Wars skin. If George Lucas read this, he’d either laugh or cry — and neither would be good for you. Fix your story. Or at least, admit it has nothing to do with Anakin Skywalker anymore.

Dark Lord: Bride of Vader

Pistol_Pete_76 · Movies

17 Chs

Hekat0nchei

2021-01-28

best d*mn fanfic I've ever read hope to see such a great work again from you author.... maybe a mandalorian as MC and I'd love to see a proper romance with Ahsoka and no harem well you're decision in the end

Broke: A Clone Wars Tale (Star Wars)

Reis123 · Movies

359 Chs

When a max level big boss picks up a level zero little girl

[Wear it quickly, 1v1, Double Clean Sweet Pet] Deermouth regretted it. Which treasure wasn't shiny and which treasure wasn't beautiful? Why did he take things so hard to get his hands on the Heavenly Lord's divine egg? Now, it was time to go down to the lower realm with the system to find the child. A Heaven Realm's max level big shot had been so shameless that he had to run around the three thousand worlds for a level zero divine egg that had yet to hatch. It was really embarrassing! At first, Deer Mouth thought so. After that… The little girl's voice was soft,"Brother, someone is bullying me." The little human's eyes lit up. The little beauty pitifully said,"General, I miss you ~" Thus, Lu Xian's thoughts changed. He snatched the marriage stone and kidnapped the Heaven Monarch cub. "Father-in-law, don't I look like your future son-in-law?" he asked, running to the Heavenly Lord to propose marriage. -- [Little skirt: 930049386, the treasure of reading books can enter the skirt to chat ~] There was also the completed book,"The Little Jiaojiao Who Came Through Is Spoiled Again", which was super sweet!

Wood sheng flower

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Paranoid school bully, he just wants to spoil me

Lu Tang was the daughter of Fengshi Group, but unfortunately, she was not favored. When he was 15 years old, he was brought back to the school. After that, he transferred to No.1 Middle School. Deer Candy used to be ignorant and incompetent Now that she was in a new school, she decided to turn over a new leaf and become a sweet little cutie in No.1 Middle School. Hence, she had Qin Ci head over heels for her. - One day, Lu Tang's former brothers came to Jiang City to see her. On the way, they quarreled with a group of people. They all went to Deer Candy to complain and ask her to back them up. Deer Candy didn't think it was good to fight, but she still agreed. After all, she had to do everything for her brother. At their place When Lu Tang heard her brother's harsh words, she felt that he was a fool. She went forward to stop him, and then she saw Qin Ci's gloomy face. Oh my, her disguise was broken just like that? A certain man: Didn't you tell me that you're soft and easy to push down? So this is how you push me down - In Qin Ci's heart, Lu Tang was soft, cute, and easy to push down. However, who would have thought that she was actually a tyrant flower? Her heart was extremely black. Little cutie in front of people, female Rakshasa behind people Master Qin: I wonder when my Ba Wang Hua will marry me Later, when they met again, Lu Tang was already a public idol, and Qin Ci was a rising star in business, the president of Deca. De-deer Ca-candy-sugar So, candy, I've come my whole life just for you They finally met again, putting an end to the unsettling feelings of this youth. Deer candy was the sweetest candy Qin Ci had ever eaten. (Special reminder: The male protagonist sometimes goes 'intermittently insane')

Half Star Candy

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Leisurely System Space

Half a year after her parents passed away, Jiang Wenwen obtained the farming space of the system. She slowly farmed in the space and sold the food she grew in the galactic store.

a yarn

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But I love you

In her previous life, Xia Shengge had always thought that she was an illegitimate daughter who could not be exposed to the public. Her birth was a sin. He was willing to be his sister Xia Ruoling's double and shooter. Even if he had to take the blame and go to jail, he would never complain. Until the last bit of value was squeezed dry by his beloved 'family'. After she was sold, she only found out that everything was a scam before she died. When he woke up from his dream, his hatred surged to the heavens. Xia Shengge walked up to the stage from behind the scenes and stripped off all the glory of being a " sister." Her sister was a genius composer with a heavenly voice? I'm sorry, she wrote the lyrics and sang the song. Her sister was the top scorer of the college entrance examination and a top student? I'm sorry, she was the one who took the college entrance examination on behalf of me. My sister is a big idiot. His sister had countless big shots backing her up. Whoever touched her would die. Sorry, the real savior of those big shots was actually her. They turned around and praised her to the top. Her sister had a crush on Lu Jiucheng, the head of the Lu Corporation, for many years and had always hyped up that she was the only one worthy of Lu Jiucheng. Xia Shengge removed her ugly makeup and swore to take away everything that Xia Ruoling was obsessed with… No, wait! Forget it. Lu Jiucheng was a paranoid and sickly big shot. He was the famous " Life-Taking Yama " in Yun Du, and she really couldn't afford to offend him. However, when she turned around, Xia Shengge was blocked by Lu Jiucheng at the corner. He kissed her passionately on the lips." You were the one who provoked me first. Now you want to run away? Too late." * * * The nine cities of Shengge, a lifetime of gentleness. In this world, there were always some encounters because they were destined, and there were always some misses because they wanted to reunite. [The cold and paranoid sickly male protagonist who is only gentle to the female protagonist VS the reborn female protagonist who is committed to regaining her identity and taking revenge.]

Xiangsi Zi

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Reborn Farm Girl System

Tiantian was reborn until her stepmother had yet to enter the house, her family had yet to disperse, her brother had not been sold, her sister had not gone missing, and her brother had not broken his leg chasing after her stepmother who had run away with silver. In this life, Tiantian would have the system in her hands, and the vicious stepmother would get lost! Stepsister, get lost. And that scumbag, I don't like you. Get lost. Brother Hunter, don't go! Let's continue our relationship in this life. Sigh! That auntie, I was blind in my previous life. In this life, can you be my stepmother? System, system, can you be more reliable! Hurry up and make me a blessed woman!

Nan Nan went home.

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