anakin ahsoka fanfic

Star Wars: The Ends Justify the Means

CDR_Grae

2019-10-06

Very well written and the beginning is very interesting! Good Star Wars fanfiction is very hard to come by, especially in my favorite genre (time travel/reincarnation/etc). Then I see a time travel fic with Ahsoka as the MC and I'm so excited. Hope she can fix what went wrong with Anakin as well as the clones. Good work!

Star Wars Fixing Mistakes

User388 · Others

3 Chs

GOULA

2025-07-03

This fanfic is not just a failure — it’s an open insult to everything Anakin Skywalker stands for. The author has clearly missed the entire emotional core of Star Wars and instead turned a complex, tragic character into a shallow, power-hungry warlord whose heart can be swayed by the first alien woman who offers him a throne. You have the audacity to show Anakin’s perfect dream — his mother alive, Padmé and the children safe, Obi-Wan at peace, Ahsoka still a Jedi — and then you make him throw that all away in the same chapter just because some DC war empress says, “Let’s rule the galaxy together.” That’s not a twist — that’s character assassination. Padmé’s love, Anakin’s fall, the weight of his pain — all of that is tossed aside like garbage. You didn’t write Darth Vader. You wrote an edgy OC in a helmet. The writing is shallow, the emotional beats are nonexistent, and the tone is closer to fan service than storytelling. Even Maxima is reduced to a plot device — a cheap “Padmé replacement” with none of the depth, only used to prop up Vader as a romantic fantasy. This isn’t dark. This isn’t tragic. It’s a parody of power fantasies wrapped in stolen Star Wars skin. If George Lucas read this, he’d either laugh or cry — and neither would be good for you. Fix your story. Or at least, admit it has nothing to do with Anakin Skywalker anymore.

Dark Lord: Bride of Vader

Pistol_Pete_76 · Movies

17 Chs

Hekat0nchei

2021-01-28

best d*mn fanfic I've ever read hope to see such a great work again from you author.... maybe a mandalorian as MC and I'd love to see a proper romance with Ahsoka and no harem well you're decision in the end

Broke: A Clone Wars Tale (Star Wars)

Reis123 · Movies

359 Chs

The soul of the game is not gone

Whether it was Beijing opera, Kunqu opera, or Yunnan opera, they all had the same soul! (Most of the characters have their own archetypes, but in order to respect history, they have chosen a pseudonym. The main character is a combination of various opera artists, and there is no specific archetype.)

Young Master Yi Nineteen

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Start signing in from the alchemist

This was a world filled with demons and devils. In order to fight against demons and devils, people developed the profession of demon alchemists. They used the corpses of demons and devils to refine divine weapons. By chance, Zhao Yu discovered that he could obtain a check-in opportunity through the demon's corpse. "Congratulations on signing in and obtaining the Mask of the Night!" " Congratulations on signing in and obtaining the Heart of the Undying!" …… "Demon alchemist! I must become a demon alchemist!" Zhao Yu made up his mind." This is the only way we can legally purchase the corpses of the Magical Beasts."

The rain of that year

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Conan, stop!

One day, when he opened his eyes, he realized that he was in the middle of a kidnapping, but he was a police officer. With the expectations of some people, Zhu Xingyou embarked on this path of no return. It wasn't until many years later that he realized how wrong he was when he looked back. He could not help but sigh." It's so hard to be a police officer." "So you know that you're a police officer." Conan had mixed feelings. Which police officer would let the witness make a statement? This was just a small part of this guy's notorious record. Mu Mu Shisan felt both gratified and bitter. In just a few years, he had climbed above him. Back then, when he was still a leader. This guy had been commanding his colleagues, including his superior, on his first day as a police officer. He did not seem to have the awareness of a newcomer when he was commanding. In the end, he only said 'dear leader'. It seemed like this guy knew who the leader was.

Wagga

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Young Master Fu's Dark Moonlight

Three years ago, Gu Xinjiu was young and frivolous. Her boyfriend was stolen by someone else, but she also stole someone else's boyfriend. She made a bet with Fu Sinian, but he abandoned her mercilessly. From then on, she became the dark moonlight in his heart! Three years later, the Gu Corporation went bankrupt and the Gu family was destroyed. Gu Xinjiu fell from the clouds and fell into Fu Sinian's hands. He reached out to her." Marry me and I can give you what you want!" Short clip: "Young Master Fu, the media is saying that Madam is a down-and-out daughter who has clung to a rich family!" "Get them to change it. Madam is from a prestigious family in B City and married into the Fu family!" "Young Master Fu, no one is wearing the gown designed by Madam!" "I'll wear it! All the artistes in Fu Entertainment are wearing it!" "Young Master Fu, there are rumors that Madam is willful, vicious, and promiscuous!" "Who said that!" "Uh... You said it!" The expression on Fu Sinian's handsome face changed subtly. Gu Xin held his face for a long time, raised her eyebrows, and said softly," Hubby, does your face hurt?"

Xi Mingyue

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The 18th tier became famous because of metaphysics

Yu Wanwan had transmigrated to a parallel world. In that world, she was an abandoned daughter of a wealthy family and a blackmailer. His father was not close, his stepmother was poisonous, his scumbag sister was a plagiarist, and what was even more hateful was that the person he had always had a crush on was actually a spy sent by his scumbag sister to snatch his shares. Yu Wanwan said,"Get lost. I want to start a career." Exorcising evil, catching g, exterminating demons, protecting the righteous path, and helping luck, wasn't he very busy? Who would have thought that she would become famous in the entertainment industry because of these metaphysics… Not only that, but she was also targeted by the top flower. If she went to the variety show, he would go too. She was acting in a period drama, and he was going too. She acted in a movie, and he came again. The top fans couldn't take it anymore and bombarded Yu Wanwan. Refuse to bind! I refuse to scam!" Who knew that the top celebrity would post on Weibo that night,"Don't talk nonsense, I'm the one chasing her." The trending searches exploded again! Yu Wanwan: "???" [Group ID: 1013461831 (Knocking on the door: Buttface)]

Mufuli

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