minato and kakashi lemon fanfiction

Good idea but the timeline is a mess...Minato is only around 10 years older than Kakashi (Minato died at 24 and Kakashi was a teenager). But in this novel Mikoto and Fugaku are already married, so around 20, and Kakashi is still far from being born

The chronology is completely messed up, Nawaki is only a couple of years older than Minato. Nawaki died when he was around 12-13, Minato must be no more than 10 years old now, and the difference between Kakashi's generations is about 10 years. That is, Kakashi and the others have only just been born, while Kurenai is already quite old, and Sakumo's death is approaching, which should happen when Kakashi is 5 years old.

you got the timeline messed up. one kakashi and Rin and Obito and asuma should be in the same class. Two kushina abduction happens in the second great ninja war. Minato participated in the war. and kushina and Minato are classmates

please don't drop one of the best minato fanfiction

Dude you really don't know naruto, first of all you made so many mistakes in the timeline. Then you misperceived the characters' behavior and personality. Shizune was taken out of the village by Tsunade when she was a child. Minato created the rasengan during the 3rd shinobi war. Minato has the highest perception ability in all of Konoha's history, and even in all of the elemental nations (only Uzumaki with a Kekkai Genkai can compete with him). Kakashi's father died before he became a chuunin, and Kakashi was not on Team Minato until he was 12 years old. He constantly moved between other teams until he got into Minato's team (for ignoring his teammates for the sake of the mission) Kakashi, Rin and other characters' behaviors are different when they were younger. No technique in the Naruto universe can permanently strengthen the body. This is against the rules of the Naruto universe. Rasengan is not randomly distributed to team members by Minato. Minato only taught Rasengan to Jiraiya, Kushina and Kakashi who had a close bond with him, not even Hiruzen knows how to do it. The young genin in the 3-person teams in the Naruto world are not students of the jonin, jonin are expected to teach only the basics, they usually do not even teach jutsu unless they have a special bond with the person. Minato and Veigar have just met, there is no connection between them, the teacher is not a student and he did not take him as an apprentice, why would he teach his personal technique to a random person that he did not teach to the ninjas he entrusted their lives to for decades? I suggest you fix these and rewrite it. Reply