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I Am Loaded with Passive Skills
Author: Eat Apples Late at Night
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Outer yard disciple of the Tiansang Spirit Palace, Xu Xiaoshou, had average talent. However, after coming out of his death seclusion, he realized that everything had changed. He had received a Passive System with many strange, miraculous passive skills: He would become stronger with every breath. He would become stronger when he got attacked. He would become stronger when he got mocked… Xu Xiaoshou was forced to shout, “Oh God, I don’t want to be like this either. Everything I did was because I was being forced to! I am so passive!”

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[BL] CRAVING HIM: Addicted to His Voice

They say the body has memory. I didn’t believe that until I started waking up soaked in sweat and c*m, my heart racing, my fingers trembling, my lips parted as if I’d been whispering his name in sleep. But I never even knew his real name. I remember his voice though, how it curled around me like smoke, soft and deep, commanding yet kind, dark and dangerous. He never touched me. Never laid a hand on me. But I came so hard, I cried. Now, every night, I crave it. That voice. That whisper that made my knees weak. That sin I never thought I’d want. I thought I was straight. Now, I’m not even sure I’m sane. And I think I’d ruin myself just to hear it again. For 25 years, Zayn lived in a world of straight expectations, dating girls, chasing pleasure that always ended in silence and frustration. Sex was a routine, not release. Until one bored night, chasing a thrill, he said yes to something different. A man in a club offered him more than money, he offered a secret, a night of satisfaction like he’d never known. But when Zayn entered that hotel room, he didn’t expect him, the rich, cold, dangerously alluring heir of a conservative empire, whose father publicly condemns everything he hides in the dark. What started as a one-night experiment turned into a dangerous addiction. Without a single touch, Zayn was broken open, undone, and made to scream, cry, and beg, only through sound. Now, even back home, Zayn trembles when he hears his voice in dreams, in memory, in madness. His sheets are always wet. His nights are restless. His body wants more. And the worst part? He's starting to want him, too. 18+ WARNING This story contains explicit male-male content, intense erotic scenes, and psychological seduction. If you're not ready for a world where a voice can break you, proceed cautiously. Read at your discretion.

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Is passive voice bad in fiction?
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2024-09-27 17:14
It depends. In moderation, passive voice can add variety and emphasis. But if it dominates the writing, it can make the story less dynamic and harder to follow.
What are the effects of passive voice in fiction?
2 answers
2024-11-13 07:16
Passive voice in fiction can affect the pacing. Since it often makes the sentence a bit more complex, it can slow down the reading speed, which might be useful when the author wants to build tension. Also, it can be used to avoid naming the doer when the author wants to keep the reader guessing. For instance, 'The message was delivered, but no one knew who did it.' This adds an element of intrigue to the story.
How is passive voice used in fiction?
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2024-11-13 03:23
In fiction, passive voice can be used to shift the focus. For example, 'The door was opened by the detective.' Here, the focus is on the door rather than the detective who opened it. It can create a sense of mystery or draw attention to an action's result.
Why is passive voice bad in fiction?
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2024-10-14 01:28
The main issue with passive voice in fiction is that it can make the action less clear and direct. It adds more words and complexity without adding much value. Also, it can distance the reader from the characters and events.
Is fiction usually written in passive voice?
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2024-10-10 12:03
In general, fiction leans more towards the active voice. It helps to create a sense of immediacy and makes the action and characters more vivid. However, passive voice can be used sparingly for certain effects or to vary the writing style.
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