pokemon ash better journey fanfiction

It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! I love it!!! 👍😍😍 This is a unique fanfiction.. Usually pokemon fanfic is in Ash age (either MC join Ash in his journey or not), but not this story.. Ash not even born in this story.. This story also have quite detail about his system and pokemon world (that plus point for me).. Just give MC a partner/friends in his journey, it will make this story more great.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great work author sama 😁😁👍👍👍

This is the best pokemon fan-fic I ever read. It’s going so well with the mc accompanying Ash in his journey and unlike Ash this guy know exactly how to train pokemons and his pokemons are so cool and unique. I’m especially waiting Kalos journey

the story take place 5 years before Ash born (15 years before Ash starting his journey give or take). start kinda slow but the pace speed up when the MC begin his journey. it's just the author sometimes develop important things offscreen then explain in a flashback like a pokemon evolution, item acquisition, etc.

It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a very great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is great too... I like that "Ash" is more smart and do his job to train his pokemon to become stronger.. He not only caught pokemon original Ash caught, but also other pokemon.. I like to see he still go with his friends (Brook and Misty), but he also go with Yellow.. I think he should go to Rota to learn and train his Aura.. I also hope to see Yellow got better with her power.. I like Ash interaction with his pokemon and other people.. Why he have a double (he create it using his Aura)?? It's not Naruto.. And why he play to much at crucial time (like when he fight Executive Pretel in Lavender Town).. That's my only complaint.. But overall it's a very great story 😁👍 Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍

This is one of the best Pokemon fanfiction I've ever read. I love how you've changed the original plot. By not letting Ash give away or release his pokemon. I also like how you've given Ash more pokemon than just the originals. I kinda hope you evolve Bulbasaur because. While yes with the added weight can slow him down. As shown in pokemon xy with the ninja Venusaur. Venusaur can be fast and agile. And I think showing how Ash can overcome the obstacles in his way. This will really show how different this Ash is from the original. I also just think it's better to evolve them. Unless they really don't want to evolve. Or you can't help make it so they can stay the same when evolved. Like fighting style or stay fast/agile. But with most Pokemon especially with the system. I think they can evolve without losing anything like fighting style or speed/agility.I also really hope Ash will get all the pseudo-legendaries and starter pokemon. Plus Gallade, Garchomp, Luxray, Gardevoir and Altaria. As you can see I really want him to have a lot of pokemon different from the original. I really think he should have a fairy and dragon team. But I really want him to have teams of all the types. But I think this is enough of me chatting. Please update soon. We love you.