pokemon better ash fanfiction

It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! I love it!!! 👍😍😍 This is a unique fanfiction.. Usually pokemon fanfic is in Ash age (either MC join Ash in his journey or not), but not this story.. Ash not even born in this story.. This story also have quite detail about his system and pokemon world (that plus point for me).. Just give MC a partner/friends in his journey, it will make this story more great.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great work author sama 😁😁👍👍👍

It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a very great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is great too... I like that "Ash" is more smart and do his job to train his pokemon to become stronger.. He not only caught pokemon original Ash caught, but also other pokemon.. I like to see he still go with his friends (Brook and Misty), but he also go with Yellow.. I think he should go to Rota to learn and train his Aura.. I also hope to see Yellow got better with her power.. I like Ash interaction with his pokemon and other people.. Why he have a double (he create it using his Aura)?? It's not Naruto.. And why he play to much at crucial time (like when he fight Executive Pretel in Lavender Town).. That's my only complaint.. But overall it's a very great story 😁👍 Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍

This is one of the best Pokemon fanfiction I've ever read. I love how you've changed the original plot. By not letting Ash give away or release his pokemon. I also like how you've given Ash more pokemon than just the originals. I kinda hope you evolve Bulbasaur because. While yes with the added weight can slow him down. As shown in pokemon xy with the ninja Venusaur. Venusaur can be fast and agile. And I think showing how Ash can overcome the obstacles in his way. This will really show how different this Ash is from the original. I also just think it's better to evolve them. Unless they really don't want to evolve. Or you can't help make it so they can stay the same when evolved. Like fighting style or stay fast/agile. But with most Pokemon especially with the system. I think they can evolve without losing anything like fighting style or speed/agility.I also really hope Ash will get all the pseudo-legendaries and starter pokemon. Plus Gallade, Garchomp, Luxray, Gardevoir and Altaria. As you can see I really want him to have a lot of pokemon different from the original. I really think he should have a fairy and dragon team. But I really want him to have teams of all the types. But I think this is enough of me chatting. Please update soon. We love you.

My rating may seem low but hear me out. In this fic Ash is a little more mature than his cannon counterpart and that is good. Now we come to the problem that is his growth is way too much unrealistic as well as his rivals gray and leaf. most adults are barely B+ or A rank trainers and that is after years of training but ash has a full team of A+ and two pseudo s rank pokemon along with arious B+ rank pokemon in 8 months. And every time something happens pokemon league calls ash . Qar with shadow pokemon ash destroy's 90 percent of them it is said by LT.surge . evey problem call ash. This is just unrealistic and unreasonable. they relay on 10 year old kid for every thing. It is better than most trash but nothing extraordinary either. Well but if you want to pass the time than this is good for that but not a fic you will follow.

It's like the original but better and I like how the story goes especially with ash and is Pokemon and friends he made and is adventure I hope he's doing good