rudy fact vs fiction

this fanfic setting is quite cool. having a new MC as rudy brother is indeed a genius stroke! i'm curious how they grow their relationship in the future. though i have one thing which really bug me tho that is the way narratives keep breaking third wall. if only the story is told like how the original book avoid mentioning other literature too much! also arthur is a man who read mushoku tensei is a fatal flaw. that means that rudy and the whole world is a fictional character made up book writer. how do you solve that fact in the future? what if the original mushoku tensei turn out the world where rudy lives is actually alternate world? what about the god/beings who incarnate rudy? its become overly complicated and nonsensical. arthur should be a man cam from the same earth where pre-reincarnated rudy lived. but i guess it doesnt matter since the book is abandoned anyway

[NTR Warning!!!] An absolute shame as a Mushoku Tensei fanfic, this completely ate itself up while the Author clearly knew what he was doing. Differences between the normal Light Novel and this fanfic are noticeably small, other than the fact the Original Rudy was a big perv, the other lad is a carbon copy of the Original, just slightly less perverse. Over 20 chapters were built around the relationship of a "child" and a 19-26-year-old maid, who Rudues was in-love with. as weird as it was, the Author decided to introduce an NTR aspect into the mix. Rudy's father, Paul did the deed with Lilia with a full chapter that had dialogue between both of them and Lilia loved it. When the time came, she brought up the fact that she was pregnant with Paul's child, and Rudy just sat there, Holding himself, did not speak up, and put the blame on Paul, when it was a mutual friend-with benefits-moment. Only for her to come and regret it apologizing to Rudy for what she's done. Rudy's mind does not seem to be that of a reincarnated man, as he acts and behaves like a child sometimes. as of recent chapters, Rudy is building and expanding his relationship with Sylphy which is weird considering the fact that she kissed him and he just sat there. This would literally fall short under "grooming" completely unnecessary. It'd be best that Rudy tries to build a relationship AFTER he reaches AT LEAST 15-16, the standard age to be an adult in the MT-verse. In conclusion: The Author has a sick mind and knew what he was doing. probably made the deed between Lilia and Paul happen so that Aisha gets born and so an 'Oyakudon' part happens. The state of the "Fanfic" if you'd call it that is sickening. The story barely progresses per chapter, Rudeus's powers aren't that different from the normal story, just a few new moves and all. and that's it. PS: I know the Author is reading this but wont respond as he only reads the good comments praising him and ignores the comments that make sense. It's best that you have a time skip chapter where Rudues age's up, since he wouldn't meet Eris, he should have a time-skip arc prior to or after the teleportation incident.

Very cool intersection of science fiction and fantasy, in a tale of former friends lost in a battle of good vs. evil. The world-building is where this book truly shines.

Love how you gave Rein an actual personality this time instead of your previous work. I do hope you take time to explore Rein's and Rudy's relationship as reincarnated twins. I do have 1 request have Rudy get all of his original harem members. Slyph, Roxy and Eris were important for Rudy's development. If you are going to give Rein a harem can please use girls that don't get enough spotlight.

I really love this book and it is very interesting. I have been a big fan of science fiction and this book suits my prefences perfectly. I'm waiting for 'Godzilla vs Kong'