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Author: Bad_Wolf_7811
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An amazing world of cultivation. A majestic world where miracles happen. There is a warrior who defies destiny and forge his own path facing innumerable difficulties ahead. Come and join the life of the person who will go against the set destiny of the cruel world and become something extraordinary. ===== Extraordinary my foot. What is this illogical cr*p? Does it even make sense? If you are doctor, then work in a hospital. What the hell are you doing going after girls? If you are a commander in the army, then bring your army to get revenge on those who wronged you. Why go through the trouble of pretending to be a weakling. You are a useless son in law? Your wife's family thinks you are good for nothing? Then how the hell did you score her in the first place?!!! If they like money so much and you are a hidden millionaire, then why in the name of sanity would you hide this fact and be berated every day?!!! The hell is all this?!!! The more I read it, the more illogical it becomes. Like this all came straight out of someone's as-- [Host, why don't you calm down?] 'You shut up!!! You're the reason I'm stuck here in the first place!!!!' [Host, you need anger management] 'THE FU*K DID YOU SAY?!!!!!' ===== Hello everyone! This is my second novel and so far, nothing is decided. This is just an idea that has been plaguing my mind for quite a long time and I decided to let it out and let you guys decide whether or not I should work on it. Give it a proper read and let me know. You guys will decide the fate of this novel. Also, I would like you guys to come up with proper genres for this story. Bonus chapters: 150 PS for one chapter 300 PS for another chapter 20 GT for two chapters 50 GT for another two chapters 1 Review of 4 stars or above, 1 extra chapters Maximum extra chapters per week: 7 ===== The cover is A.I generated and is not mine. If the real owner would like me to remove it, let me know in any chapter comments. That's it. Enjoy! ~~ Character art: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1B7sHito4UOZqPIK5pPyIFTzgqiaT_ZlU?usp=sharing
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LightningCatThief
LightningCatThief
2020-06-11

First of all, this is a well written story, not many grammatical or spelling errors, so it is a very comfortable read. Way better than most. But the first few chapters are rushed and cut down to minimal content. The scene where Hadrian gets adopted is majorly important, but so short that you don't get the feeling that it happened at all. It is like a cut down version of the memory of a dream you had a week ago. The motives and relations/backstorys are nebulous, like Lily being a submissive who follows James decision(If you can call that a decision, he didn't even have a single coherent thought in that scene) to give away one of her 4 year old children without even showing her supposed displeasure, or the way Dorea practically jumped at the chance to take Hadrian as her own while removing James as Heir. Maybe they were already mayor disagreements before, but we don't know because there is no backstory. Bdw. Why isn't Sirius Heir Black, the current Lord should still be alive and Dorea was never from the main branch. I could speculate a lot of things and at the moment it feels like Dorea wants a new try at training a Heir because she failed the first time and Lily is more of a housemaid than a wife. The trend sadly continues, because the world building is just as flawed. Examples: Magic elementry school starting at 7 without subjects like English, History, Math etc. I know this isn't covered in the original, but at 11 most children are at least able to write and do basic calculations, even if taught by their parents, but at 7? Dueling at 7? Do wizard children develop differently? Do all Wizards posses genius level intellect? Not unimaginable if explained right. I mean every single one can develop a mind palace approximation , so who knows. In addition the four houses are practically identical with the values they are looking for. Why would Americans copy that flawed system? Hogwarts had 4 founders and people keep at it because it is tradition, but a school founded hundreds of years later making the same decision/mistake? Conclusion: Author can write, but has not thought trough the world and the characters background. Or he just doesn't want to tell us. Tipp: Authors Note to explain basic world building and character profiles. The community can help.

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2024-11-10 17:50
The housemaid herself is a key character. She is at the center of the story, and her experiences, hopes, and fears drive the narrative.
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2024-11-10 17:16
Love and relationships might also be a theme. There could be unrequited love or complicated romantic entanglements between the housemaid and other characters in the story, such as a member of the household or another servant.
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