common problems in children's stories

This different angle stories from mo couple and their children make reader like me more corious But i see, the problems aren't complicated enought than before Just simple to get finished

Forced history... children's dialogues during battles... Enemies with mental problems appear consecutively... i can say that the novel had great potential but was poorly used by the author.

first, it's an MTL, so if you can't take pronoun errors and random other grammatical problems.. you have been warned. otherwise, it's a chinese cultivation novel with a well-done but twisted mc. there are, however, none of the common nationalism/racism problems that often show up.

Honestly this is the bare minimum for a translation the problem is we are mostly fed slop on this app. Good writing quality and a translation that isn't littered with errors aren't the same. It suffers with common Chinese story problems whilst the grammar might not reveal it how characters are portrayed does, honestly even the mc's use of electromagnetism feels Chinese coded, I swear any Chinese mc that uses electricity or magnetism always follows the path of the railgun. My other issues with it are honestly consistent with canon Naruto issues: inconsistent and poor power scaling and children flip flopping between being children and child soldiers/the most mature person you will ever meet.

I give the book 5 stars since I think it's important for other children to learn about courage and facing problems just like what Juvien did. This book was very well written.