This is a Fanfic... I don't own anything!!! All the characters belong to their respective owners!! --~Synopsis (SEASON- I, II, III)~-- Lily Potter sacrificed herself to protect her son but things didn't go as planned and find herself in a different situation than expected... How will Harry cope with someone guiding him in his steps in the Wizarding World? Find out about the young Wizard with a different take on destiny and the changes it brings... --~Synopsis (SEASON- IV)~-- Harry is no longer the weak little child that he was a few years ago. Now, he is no longer alone without any allies, but his enemies have also started to make their moves with new enemies starting to rear their heads... What will Harry do? Will he crumble under the pressure or will he thrive in the face of his enemies? ~~This is not a Canon Rewrite or anything similar~~ --~Support the Author~-- If you appreciate and love my work, then you are welcome to donate to support me and keep me motivated. Upto 25 Chapters advanced Chapters of this Fanfic are available on my P.a.t.r.e.o.n. P.A.T.R.E.O.N Link- p.a.t.r.e.o.n.com/IngloriousMe --~Discord~-- If you want to discuss something or check the artwork or the character sheets then join my Discord Server. My Discord Server Link:- https://discord.gg/zdUqAGKrkm
Sorry if things sound confusing, since englisch is the third language im learning and use google translate to make it easier for myself. Time of review: Chapter 33 So after binging the chapters i can say, the author needs to really start proof reading the chapters. Names are often switched up from the MC for example at the beginning its Kawaki Aoba, then switches around chapter 8 to Kawaki Qinguy then few Chapters later to Aoki Kawaki and Aobi kawaki, this is getting confusing fast and ruines smooth reading if the name changes every few Chapter. Also the ages of the characters gets mixed up since somtimes they are children, then adults back to teenager. same with ranks or team composition. first its said Asuma Sarutobi, Kurenai Yuhi and mc are a team with Shinku Yuhi as jonin leader, then its Kurenai with her genin team and few paragraphs later its another team. For me honestly, the writer/translator needs to overhaul the story, sets on 1 name/age/team etc and starts proof reading the chapters. then it can be a good story, otherwise it read like a 2/10 rating chinese novel