clown tickle fanfic

Here is the shameless author. I don't have my words to say but it's going to be a good fanfic. MC is a clown that likes to do whatever he wants. Just read it. You will enjoy this fanfic.

I ship Feather and Clown! The OG!Clown not Ro's Clown. Poor Clown, so loyal. I want them to be together in after life QAQ The story are good. The horror are there, mixed with the comedy it's just perfect (LOL at the cookbook). Next I am going to read Ro Ginger's Fat Otaku! For now, here is 5* from me.

This fanfic is like an insert. A bit of a guilty pleasure and a 'what if' scenario. It’s not really that good, but it’s better than nothing and better than most. I wish the author was a little more creative, but this is a fanfic. As a fanfic that should tickle the pickle it’s good, not amazing, but good nonetheless, however as an independent book, it’s bad, quite bad. I believe it’s important for authors to see their fanfic not just as an insert or a 'what if', but as an actual book too, just so it’s a bit more engaging.

It’s really quite an average book. Nothing that hasn’t been seen before. The only interesting part of the book is the clown and the weapon the mc chose, even the clown isn’t that original as different beings have taken this role on before it’s just that the clown itself is new. 🤡 🤡

This novel needs to be repaired, I cringed when Tony stark was mentioned as he is the epitome of sarcasm, but all I got when i read this was clown this clown that actor clown, that doesn't convey his personality at all, the grammar also needs to fixed, there are redundant clauses littering this fanfiction.