invoke new story

magnum opus in literary. + Details in world building. + Complex/real characters with real developments. + Concrete yet fluid power system. + Invoke true emotion from readers. + Invoke the fear of the unknowns and mysteries.

Initially I liked it but the progress of the story is very slow.. I just dropped it out of boredom.. it fails to invoke interest of the readers.. it's damn boring..

So far, the story, although plot is not that new, what got me interested is the dark scene at the beginning. It gives readers compelling scenes to expect at later chapters. Writing style is good, and grammatically justified. The genre is only romance fiction, there is no action in this literary work? I hope there will be because it will invoke more readers into it. Lastly, i think the "Synopsis" needs more content.

Thank you Ms Author its really cool. Love , love your story. Nice tandem. Great development of characters. Invoke the anger and fun and happy emotions in me.

A comfortable read this is, as the story makes great use of language in order to invoke imagery and emotion to the reader. I personally enjoyed reading as it gave me the time and opportunity to see how the story develops overtime.