After becoming a poor daughter, her fiancé came to her door
The damsel in distress, the daughter of a noble family,
A scholar from Xiaoliu Village.
She was originally a phoenix flying in the sky, but one day, she was framed by others while everyone laughed at her. Her family was almost ruined.
Even though she was in the golden nest, she was also mocked by the ugly faces of the others." Ah, how is she still the beautiful and charming Miss Jiaojiao who is piled up with brocade and gold beads? The Emperor is merciful. Her declining brothel is already a blessing to the ancestors!"
Si Yinchen was a real phoenix born in a golden nest. When his family was defeated, he really fulfilled the saying," A phoenix that has fallen off the shelf is not as good as a chicken."
When the tree fell, the monkeys scattered. Si Yinchen also thought that even if he did not lead a wandering life and did not touch the water of spring, his future would be difficult.
Unexpectedly, one day, a handsome young scholar came to his door. He calmly took out the token in his arms." We were engaged when we were young. Now that you're of age, I'm here."
Pushing a boat across the water
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First off the grammar is pretty good, there werent any mistakes that i really noticed on that front. i like the dynamic of the relationship between Coraline and Irene. how Coraline did something really f***ed up and that she has to keep up that secret to maintain their relationship. Theres a lot that can be done with that. I like how Coraline is protrayed as a calculating woman, and the fact that she finds rumours about her unpleasant is very human. some novels just have the characters not talk about it, or theyre portrayed as not caring which i just cant wrap my head around. The characters actually seem real with their baggage and personalities, another thing that is usually difficult for other authors. all in all i think this could be a very intriguing read for someone into this sort of novel.