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I really like the story, especially how the twin love for each other. The little brother taking time to read a story to his little sister, shows how deep his love for his dear little sister. No body can bully his little sister, it seems that way. 💕💕💕

It Is Good So Far I Hope Just Change Up A Little Bit Of Things Like Dont Make Mc Look Like Short In The Orginal Maybe A Taller And Have Little Muscle Until He Train More And Harder And Please Dont Make The Dragons Look Small Like The Orginal Make Them Big

Ok I will start with the fact that the concept of the story is kinda interesting. Basically mc becomes a god over a 2d univercancerse of his own creation. Sounds cool, right? Well the problem with this novel is the author has no understanding of science or human biology yet precedes to talk about things like how if everything stopped moving then time would stop or the stupid idea that yoga and eating well will help his cancer. He seems to think controlling the various glands in his body will cure his cancer and wants to make himself taller by making more growth hormone, which wouldn't work at all but would instead give him a problem like enlarged feet or hands and the like. Growth hormones don't make you taller if you are full grown like damn. But of course the journey doesn't end here, beside the authors atrocious understanding of basic science, he loves just summarizing chapters. What do I mean by that? Well I mean a chapter will read like a summary. Little to no detail at all. In the span of a single paragraph he can pick a girl up, have sex, and be home in as little as 4 sentences. Honestly it was the concept of the mc being in control of a new world that got me reading this but this is at best a 2 star novel. The mc is more 2d then the world he controls. The author just ****ting on basic science is what destroys this fucking novel, it would have been a thousand times better if the author came up with a magic reason for his cancer being defeated and why he gets taller and **** instead of trying to use his incredibly limited understanding of the human body to write how the mc plans to make himself better. Read if you have nothing better to do or read. Literally a newspaper is better than this.