nine tin
There are nine kinds of tin in the ceremony: the first is black bull, the second is dragon crown, the third is music hanging, the fourth is red door, the fifth is Na Bi, the sixth is tiger Ben, the seventh is bow and arrow, the eighth is axe, and the ninth is wine.
Those who enjoy nine tin, praise worship do not call their names, enter the court do not rush, sword shoes on the palace.
Lu Chen had set off from Guangling City in the continuous spring rain. After twelve years of magnificent events, he had personally ended this chaotic world.
Looking back, he was already standing at the peak of the human world.
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[The old book of power and war, Invincible Son of a Bastard, has been completed. Friends are welcome to taste it.]
Bean sprouts in soup
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The fanfic would be much nicer if it involves different anime world hopping and with different anime characters. The Original Ben 10 story have not much depth to the story. Ben10 got popular due to steady introduction of different aliens and their abilities. But in this fanfic, we already know what the aliens are and what they can do and with the system rewards, their abilities kinda feel redundant or not utilised properly. Also,the the fanfic is in Ben10 world, which does not draw much attention from the readers due to the lacklustre and not exciting adventures in the Ben10 world. Omnitrix is OP by itself; it doesn't need any external abilities to make it interesting. What the author could do is introduce different elements to the story by visiting different worlds of games, anime and movies to make the fanfic interesting.