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Filler galore. One chapter per action. One dimensional characters, zero character development. The premise was unique, but the execution is just your standard face slaps for a motley of irrelevant characters.

Not bed BUT. There tooo much nonsens(Mc thinking)its can also be said info dump is too much extra words this why i can not give 5* 🤢 besides the mc join luffu crue what the point of transaction

I hope Tora become a admarl then gather a crue and leave the Marine please don't do some bulsht like she stay in the Marine after she becomes an admarl caus wee all know if u be a admarl u have to be the doge of the celestel

Ascendant Struggle will hook you faster than a fish on a line! It's got all the high-octane military action you could want, plus just the right amount of worldbuilding to leave you hungry for more. The characters are a motley crew of fighters with their own motivations, and I found myself rooting for them from the get-go. Keep the good work going on author!

hey man read your work and its actually great I want to collaborate let's say something like a multiverse In rainbow mist arc if you give permission in near future I would like to write a arc where My mc luffy and his crue met yours we both write our pov what do you think