izuku is all might's secret love child fanfiction

MC's personality is contradictory. moreover, considering that he wasn't original izuku, talking about his secret right off the bat was stupid decision. at least give him more time before talking about his secret.

I absolutely love this fanfiction! Although it does have a few writing and grammar mistakes here and there (like the 'I' in Izuku's name being missing). I liked how you portrayed they way Izuku's and Katsuki's relationship might have devolved in the past due to the opinions of their past classmates; which might have been the direct result of the society of BNHA and their way of thinking that being so called "quirkless" means you are useless and therefore outcasted due to that factor. I also liked that little tidbit where you explained how Mitsuki did not want to be a hero due to her phobia of blood. I would like to see more on how Toshinori feels about Bakugo's and Izuku's relationship and given how Izu and Kacchan's relationship is still shaky even though in recent chapters it has been stabilized and in sort of a "honeymoon phase." I feel that their relationship will be going through a couple more struggles due to Deku's doubt in the relationship since it hasn't been too long since Kacchan was bullying Izu (for a multitude of years). I look forward to seeing how Kacchan's and Izu's relationship develops and also how Izu's inherited quirk (from the Midoriya family bloodline), affects the storyline and Izu's relationship with his newly adopted man child and also how his actions during the USJ attack might have made him gain a target on his back from The League of Villans.

With all the action and hilarity going on I can only describe this as the secret love child of konosuba and attack on titan. Absolute mad lad crew behind the novel.

This is an ok novel. I like how Izuku became smart instead of strong. I don't like how All Might is too evil. It's as if he's the antagonist. I don't like that aspect.