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An amazing world of cultivation. A majestic world where miracles happen. There is a warrior who defies destiny and forge his own path facing innumerable difficulties ahead. Come and join the life of the person who will go against the set destiny of the cruel world and become something extraordinary. ===== Extraordinary my foot. What is this illogical cr*p? Does it even make sense? If you are doctor, then work in a hospital. What the hell are you doing going after girls? If you are a commander in the army, then bring your army to get revenge on those who wronged you. Why go through the trouble of pretending to be a weakling. You are a useless son in law? Your wife's family thinks you are good for nothing? Then how the hell did you score her in the first place?!!! If they like money so much and you are a hidden millionaire, then why in the name of sanity would you hide this fact and be berated every day?!!! The hell is all this?!!! The more I read it, the more illogical it becomes. Like this all came straight out of someone's as-- [Host, why don't you calm down?] 'You shut up!!! You're the reason I'm stuck here in the first place!!!!' [Host, you need anger management] 'THE FU*K DID YOU SAY?!!!!!' ===== Hello everyone! This is my second novel and so far, nothing is decided. This is just an idea that has been plaguing my mind for quite a long time and I decided to let it out and let you guys decide whether or not I should work on it. Give it a proper read and let me know. You guys will decide the fate of this novel. Also, I would like you guys to come up with proper genres for this story. Bonus chapters: 150 PS for one chapter 300 PS for another chapter 20 GT for two chapters 50 GT for another two chapters 1 Review of 4 stars or above, 1 extra chapters Maximum extra chapters per week: 7 ===== The cover is A.I generated and is not mine. If the real owner would like me to remove it, let me know in any chapter comments. That's it. Enjoy! ~~ Character art: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1B7sHito4UOZqPIK5pPyIFTzgqiaT_ZlU?usp=sharing

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OuranosDragon
OuranosDragon
2020-02-03

Well, this case is... peculiarly. My original language is spanish, so sorry for my spelling mistakes or gramatical. I believe that good ideas, but execution failures. By examples: The Alfonso's construction as protagonist is original, his aparience is peculiarly and attractive for a MC. But, his attitude as a person is some irregular. One word: harem. It seems like is not general opinion, but, the romance it looks very dull when there is more of a loving interest without conflict in the middle. Come on, they are goddesess, one of them is basically one nun, why doesn't theres it conflict? Not to say what's up plus womans that are attracted by Alfonso, and the number increases according you pass the episodes. Gives pathetic aura both at protagonist like the female cast. Some of these crushes come out of nowhere, all olympus goddesess they will want a son of Alfonso? Where was the dignity? That returns to the flat and predictable female cast, at least those next him. I almost can see the development of Athena coming: she admired Alfonso for strategies copy paste of history's random legion, she falls in love. Good, ready next on the list. I do not say that Polygamy history can't be good, but in this case the subject is being mishandled. Think it would be more interesting see the rest crushes of another humans, or gods, or nobody. See interactions with the humanity and the world instead of focus attention on a character. Due to the previous point it is difficult to take another male character seriously on the side of the MC (who with so much attention and for other factors is dangerously touching the title of Gary Stu), especially if he tries to flirt with a female character close to him. It makes you want to say "hit it, champion. It will be for the next one" and although so far it has only happened to filler characters, it is still a bit annoying. Name of character and location they are generic, well, only a little generic. And... Greycastle, Coiling Dragon? Really? Alfonso abilities they are interesting, despite being temporal control abilities. But, integrate close combat arts is excesive and counterproductive for Alfonse's background. He is a old man, not a generic Final Fantasy monk. Well, walking stick physical abilities they could be passable. The world of the novel is good, especially the current location (for the moment in which this message the latest chapter is 293). But, the champions they have many limitations compared the Alfonso team, for the moment (the ability varierity it seems limited for the rest of the world). And, the system is no longer relevant. apart from being what attracts gods to the world. Sometimes i feel that the count of points is bad, but i'm not sure... well, does not matter. My questiong is: where is the variety of items? The MC only buy basic weapons, seeds and "potions" for increase the power and evolve of their animal companions. There is a lot interesting and good ideas think they will be relegated to second plane in favor of increases the power of Alfonso and his personal life (or put another way, his sex life). It's a waste how many female character congregates the Alfonso's emotional circle, i would be interesting if one or more of them (goddess or not) had a character evolution and forget his crush, or change his sentiments for another character. And... maybe to integrate character to contribute in the kingdom without the knowledge of Alfonso be superior or a "great" inspiration for this character, if Athena learned about military strategy thanks to Alfonso... even if the argument that we can all learn something new is present, it sounds unreal. But this is an example, i still trust you. The novel meets entertaining, i only say what i think. I hope to continue reading the novel for quite some time. Bye.

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Who is the author of 'alfonso graphic novel'?
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2024-12-09 08:39
I don't know who the author of 'alfonso graphic novel' is. There could be many independent or relatively unknown authors who have created it.
What is 'alfonso graphic novel' about?
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2024-12-09 06:45
Well, without more details, it's hard to say precisely. It could be a coming - of - age story of Alfonso. The graphic novel might show his growth from a young, naive person to someone who is more mature and has learned important life lessons. It could also be a love story where Alfonso is in search of true love, and the graphic novel uses beautiful illustrations to tell this emotional journey.
What makes 'I am Alfonso Jones Graphic Novel' unique?
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2024-12-13 10:57
The 'I am Alfonso Jones Graphic Novel' might be unique in how it tackles certain themes. If it delves deep into a particular cultural or social aspect that is not often explored in other graphic novels, that would be special. It could also be unique in its character development. Instead of having a simple arc for Alfonso Jones, it could have a complex and nuanced growth pattern that is both interesting and thought - provoking. The use of symbols and motifs throughout the graphic novel to represent different aspects of Alfonso's life could also be a factor that makes it unique.
What makes 'I am Alfonso Jones by Medina Graphic Novel' special?
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2024-11-02 03:10
Perhaps its unique art style. A good graphic novel often has art that draws you in and makes the story more vivid.
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