byakuya fanfic

I always like it when authors insert characters with the power to guide the story. In this case, the mc became Byakuya's uncle by marrying his aunt. The writing is not bad, by Webnovel standards. I like the way some characters change too. The following is my major point against it. He is strong and has a lot of influence. I liked it up to the point where he let Hisana die, even though he could've healed her, because he 'shipped,' author's words, Byakuya and Rukia better. It was forced, and I felt like Byakuya deserved better. Byakuya treats you as an uncle and respects you, yet you let the love of his life die because you preferred ByakuyaxRukia fanfics. What is the point of such a character if you will leave important things like that unchanged, especially if you've warmed up to Byakuya as his uncle. The author doing this for such a stupid reason cheapens the mc choices for me. If you don't care who Byakuya ends up with or want him with Rukia, this may be an OK fanfic for you.

This is not really bleach fanfiction, its completely AU with just the same character names. I mean can you imagine someone saying that I am writing a bleach fic and then putting byakuya in the same class as aizen and urahara? and moreover byakuya is basically stronger than yoruichi.

Good story my only complaint is that the chapters are short and byakuya is to I don't know not real like I feel he could be more open with eto

Loving it so far! Like the templates chosen. Glad that the mc isn’t a copy of byakuya. Not a fan of his law above all mentality lol. Hope you don’t drop this!

it's good better than the other one for sure so keep updating and yh it's ok byakuya is actually done better in here the other one I like this one better