the little bird and the banyan tree story

Good so far and I can see a lot of potential for the future. The release is a little slow, but that comes down to a lot of external issues. The world is a 2-dimensional plane with a few spheres rolling around or as those who are a little mentally challenged would understand the world is filled with fog and every one in a while you see a bird or a tree or a rock. Hm... I think that might have made it worse so I'll just shut up now.

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Bro I love this story verymuch, I would love to see the character build, just don’t get misled by the story shown in the Star Channel. The Story of Saguni is really a very interesting and tragic one. Bheeshma killed his entire family in starvation for having unknowingly covered that Gandhari was widowed to Banyan Tree. Saguni never did every adharma for his sister but he did it for revenge for his family. So try to get more personal story of the each character and understand them before completing the story. Like Karna’s parent came name is Vasusena, Karna was name he acquired for his Donating Heart.

Well, he chose he will have an Indian father directly , which felt a bit odd but ok I guess since I too wouldn't want to loose my religion and culture , just because Holi and Dipawali festival are so fun. But you could have made him an Indian regardless without stating that, would not have made it cringe . And all those giving bad reviews are mostly pissed off he balently specified what culture he wants to be part of and used bodhi tree for wand (considered Indian magical wood but it's more Chinese since it's part of Buddhism as there is no such thing as bodhi tree, it's the name given to the banyan tree under which Buddha achieved enlightenment ). There isn't even much mention of Indian culture after that so why are they comparing this to resist and CCP influenced Chinese novels.

A palm tree small but tall Against the deepening sky Sits at the centre of The gentle sunset of Subtle pink and rusty red Slowly diminishing around The proud little tree