female jedi and anakin sex fanfiction

Load the Anakin Skywalker template. That would be interesting especially if he gets his whole life knowledge of the force from both Jedi and Sith would he stay the same?

MC is Snape. Love relationship: Snape x Hermione. Deeply disappointed 😔 Snape's not a jedi or a sith, Snape's a hermione fanboy. Anakin Skywalker and Snape fuse their souls, in such a fusion Anakin's soul was the most predominant. So I expected an intelligent protagonist without a stupid hero complex... just read chapter 15 and draw your own conclusions

Author if your reading this review I approve your story is good but also bad, why all you guys always sided with the Jedi, Jedi are not that even good. They just left behind the people they were once swore to protect, like Anakin Skywalker got BPD(Borderline personality disorders) if you watch movies about the mandolorians where one of the empire says this, the empire brings order reducing the conflict in all planets and it’s the rebel’s are the one making more deaths around them, if so AUthor watch film theory about how evil the Jedi are

while the writing is above average for fanfiction the overall plot doesn't make much sense, with characters making choices that are beyond shortsighted and often straight up negligent once or twice a chapter. for a couple examples: 1) why isn't axel immediately taken into the Jedi order? he's 3 years old, as powerful as Anakin and has no attachments. he is literally the holy grail of Jedi padawans, and yet they place more attention on Anakin, what? 2) why do they take axel back to naboo? he's 3 literally every other option is better than todler in a war zone. I know it's just so the author can follow the plot but if you're changing nothing about cannon there's no reason to be there. 3) why isn't Padme at the Senate to spectator Palpatine and everything else? she literally worships buerocracy but instead decides to spend her time with a 3 year old? no. so yeah writings totally fine, but you really need to assess why characters make the choices they make.

This story has a lot of potential. IT’s hard finding good Anakin centered stories in fanfiction and Webnovel. I look forward to when the story starts opening up.