"An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of the original story?" [ this is a slow-burn fanfiction; the MC is just trying to experience life and enjoy it, not to take over the world and rule from the shadows.] I do not own twilight or the characters of the twilight world, all that belongs to me are my own characters.
Great chapter,the only thing i think is missing in your story is the MC's social live,i mean peter has felicia and even his mom has a boyfriend but the MC has yet to show interest in a girl. Maybe jean grey?Or even mary jane now that peter is with felicia?I would like if you paired MJ with the MC as there are few storys of an OCxMj.