sorrel king josie's story
In the online game Glory, Ye Xiu is regarded as a textbook and a top-tier pro-player. However, due to a myriad reasons, he is kicked from the team. After leaving the professional scene, he finds work in an Internet Cafe as a manager. When Glory launches its tenth server, he who possesses ten years of gaming experience once again throws himself into the game. Bringing with him the memories of his past and an incomplete, self-made weapon, his return along the road to the summit begins! After fighting and scheming, who snatched away my glory? Under the tossing of the wind and rain, my dreams shall still appear as though they had never been shattered. In all its splendor, the path shall never be lost. Before the gazes of millions, this is where I return!
This is a review of the first two chapters. The story is a well written tale about teenage witch Josie who has just moved to her Mother’s home town. Both the main character and secondary characters are well described through third party commentary, differences in dialogue word choice, and the author’s own description. For example, Josie who was a nomad and her cousin Nat who grew up in southern Louisiana do not use the same colloquiums. The setting is also given the same attention to detail. Josie’s rental house is not just a one story house but is a white house placed on stilts to avoid flooding; details like this make the house unique to the story setting. The plot has not advanced much, but I believe the author has something exciting in store.