katniss and peeta hunger games fanfiction

I only read this story because I saw hunger games and Sweet home. I wanted to see the romance between Katniss and Mc. But there are many problems with this story. 1. AI. The AI is very noticeable. I was able to bypass that but you might not be able to. It annoying to because one, the AI is so corny, and two it conveys the same thing for 5 paragraphs. Grammar and stuff like that was alright. Not the best. 2. Storyline was ehh. The first 11 chapters, so called introduction, was boring as hell apparently (I skipped tho). Then I got into the Hunger game story. It started off promising (disregarding the AI) until it started getting confusing. After the game was won things happen blah blah then Katniss kissed him but then 5 chapters later dude named gale and Katniss(idk it’s confusing it’s like they go hunting everyday, ig he’s a childhood friend blah blah idk ITS CONFUSING but mc doesn’t end up with Katniss) I don’t even think they author knows what’s going on either. (this is where I dropped but I skipped to the end) In the end it’s like the author don’t know what’s he’s writing or he doesn’t execute it properly. In the end should you read? If you want, The hunger game was interesting till it got confusing and the romance was good although it seemed idk a lil off ig but he does end up with Katniss UNTIL HE DIES THEN GRT TRANSPORTED INTO ALICE IN THE BOARDLANDS TO NEVER SEE HER AGAIN. So read at your own risk.

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Finally a hunger games fanfic

I love hunger game fanfics but I wished there was a fic of ayanokoji in the hunger games verse as it would be interesting to see him fuck with the plans of coin and snow