Starting as a Son-in-law to Establish an immortal Family
In the realm of immortal cultivation, Lu Changsheng traversed as a peasant youth, overlooked by a celestial sect. Yet, endowed with the Multitude Progeny System, he could earn rewards by propagating his lineage, nurturing offspring.
Thus, Lu Changsheng began his journey by marrying into a cultivation family, embarking on a path of intrigue, networking, and fostering descendants to expand his family's cultivation legacy.
As the cycles of time passed and epochs changed, countless supreme beings in the realms of immortality, formidable figures in the demonic path, revered saints among the demon races, and peerless beauties rose and fell, fading into the river of years.
Only Changsheng's family endured, immutable through the ages, perpetually existing, towering atop the path of immortality, sharing longevity with the heavens and earth, radiating brilliance akin to the sun and moon.
Heavenly Strings Painting Pillars · Eastern
I love the idea of the story. I've never read a decent rick and morty fanfic. Only two problems with this story are the grammar, including the poorly written dialogue and the MCs treatment of his family. I think it's supposed to come off as funny, or maybe he's lacking in emotions like rick, but it definitely hurts the story. he's just another copy of rick, and rick is a dick who didn't have the power of hindsight, but the MC does, and he has nothing to be bitter about like Rick does. or is him being a piece of sh*t an integral part of the story? because it doesn't make sense. anyways the story is decent, and if the writing gets better, it might become great.