the roundhouse novel

Goddamn, I got baited real hard. I thought this'll be a good novel and hoping for a good read, but nope I got backstabbed and roundhouse kicked on the back of my head instead. For those of you who haven't fell for this trap already, I adviced you to stay away from this if you're not into NTR. Damn CUCK...

Needs a complete rewrite and actual thought put into his wishes and development between stuffing 5 or so wishes in 1 then doubling ip the rest and the fact that apparently an untrained child regardless of his previous lifes memories can roundhouse kick and what not with no training is just poor writing author needs to take the time figure out what he wants his MC to start as and go from there don't try and be edgy or a hero or anything don't force it just feel it out and take your time to actually think about what you want the MC to be the hodgepodge of garbage wishes while they were individually good the fact you couldn't follow reality and inderstand 1 wish means just that 1 not 5 in 1 but 1 ruined any real expectations for the fic from the jump

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