He kneeled on the snow. The burning cold was reddening both his toes and fingers, but it didn't compare to the anger he was feeling at the moment. Such anger could be noticed in his expression, which even seemed animalistic, as well as in the tears streaming down his face. ----- When he opened his eyes, all he could see was an old, wooden ceiling. After staring at it for a while, he turned his head. "Oh! I'm glad you're awake!" ----- "I swear! I'm coming back alive!" ----- On August 17th 1788, Austria, a new boy is born, this boy would bring a huge change with him. The novel "The Bringer of Light" will revolve around quarrels of powerful noble families, political matters, strategic discussions, the real human condition where good and bad people don't truly exist, and much more. That boy is a prodigy child, having deep insight ever since his birth. One day, something terrible happens to him, which makes him have the goal of bringing light to this world. The main point of this book is following him on his journey to fulfill that task. He goes through a lot of internal struggles such as: Is it really possible to achieve such a thing? Is what I'm trying to do even the right choice?
I've read 5 chapters so far. In Chapter 1, characters are described well. They are further formed in the next two chapters. I loved the Cafe name- Frosty! Kk In Chapter 4, A great description of the birthday party. Liked Mr. Gibson's light, happy character, and playfulness. Also, the fight between Ariena and Charlotte was so well described. I liked how when Ariena started playing Charlotte and her cronies "put down" game, Charlotte became physical and pushed Ariena. Good plot. I did notice some grammatical errors and misspelled words but they in no way obstructed the plot in the book. Great job!