little big horn story

Mission two: Collect the seven horn beast fur and sell it to the Golden Dawn Company! Mission two: Collect the seven horn beast fur and sell it to the Golden Dawn Company! Mission two: Collect the seven horn beast fur and sell it to the Golden Dawn Company!

going into this I just expected some sort of smut power fantasy of a dungeon getting with elves, but although the dungeon being a horn dog is a big part of the story it also has some of the best characters and worldbuilding. Furthermore, it has one of the best, most scientifically intertwined magic power systems I've seen

Though a nice story and setup to begin with, but am left wondering how a fang or teeth can be made into a dagger.And author goes on to say that the mc melted the sheep's horn and bone in a fire in order to join them, surely can't the bone or horn burn in fire?

The story could've been good, if the translation had been better. Unfortunately it reads like MTL without any editing, resulting in broken English and sometimes translated names. For example: Ginkaku and Kinkaku are translated as silver horn and golden horn, even though they're names and shouldn't be translated This makes the story difficult to understand.

Hey author! you did a good job creating such a suffocating and tense environment. The story is good and the main character is very well developed. However, the constant use of sounds such as… "horn horn horn and plip plop plip plop". breaks the seriousness of the scene. There are also many observable grammatical errors, which isn't really that important since English isn't your first language. But, maybe you could ask an A.I assistant to double check for you. Overall I love the story, and will continue on waiting for the next chapters!