The Ultimate Weapon of Magic and Science
The stark-naked, handsome, young man looked intently at a winged reptile creeping in front of him, His lips, closed tight since setting foot in this new realm, began to move as words echoed in the shadowy realm of awareness.
"It has been determined that the leaders of the plan and all related individuals are dead, communication with Earth has been completely severed. Transitioning to autonomous operation mode. Updating log-in name to the fully planned 'Li Lin'. Given the current situation, autonomous task B4 is selected."
The boy, now known as Li Lin, paused briefly, his voice taking on a chilling edge as if from the depths of hell. "Infiltrate and invade the low-level civilization, colonize it, Earthify it."
The ultimate weapon in the form of a young man, in this magical alien world, sensed a familiar scent - war.
And so, he continued his mission.
Millennium Empire Navy Captain · Fantasy
The story starts well with good pacing and sufficient tension but very quickly devolves into a deus machina trope. Here is an example :mc creates a basic pistol with a limited quantity of small caliber bullets. Okay, that's pretty well balanced in a world with monsters. That lasts literally for 1 chapter. Next he makes a semi auto rifle with an untold amount of ammo and single handledly takes down a group of bandits. Great, well there goes all the tension. But wait, there's more. The very next chapter, he creates an anti-material rifle to deal with well armored monsters.