good introduction for a short story

I found that introduction a bit comical and a little short too, but as it is said, it is just an introduction. In general, the novel presents a concept that is worth following. Good luck!

What a good start to a short story. I would like a little more in depth introduction of this meeting. So far it's still a lovely read of something different

The story is good and intriguing, writing has small mistakes sometimes. Character building, introduction and especially fighting scenes are comprehensive creating utmost pleasure in reading and visuallizing. In short, a perfect novel.

Thank you for such a cute story, but the end was a bitbabrupt. The story itself was lovely, introduction was short the same as the end, quite expensive but nice to read…

The Prologue/Introduction felt a bit long since it was a handful of chapters even though they are relatively short. But once the MC went to the past the story development has had a good pacing so far (26 chp at the moment).