white collar neal peter fanfiction

I like it, and I'll continue to read it but its AU AS HELL, the plot line is out the window almost immediately, lots of details and connections are immediately changed like everyone somehow already knowing June or June's place, June somehow already has connections with Peter and the FBI, June seems to run a 4 story building like a hotel, somehow, Neal escaped with only 3 months left on his sentence but that was changed in the story as well, and like I said before plotline seems to be completely AU since the Dutch man case with Peter and Neal never happens nor some of the other cases you might remember if you've seen the series, at least none so far, other than that I'm actually liking the series, its just unexpected due to not being warned how AU the story was going to be

This novel has shown itself as a really great idea of a Marvel fanfiction and would have been one of the best. Sadly the author is a racist person and does stereotypical situations from an asian point of view. In one chapter, he literally called an African American a "Black People" and used him in a situation where this person robbed a "White-collar person" of her brand-named purse. Then he further goes on to explain that more "White men" chased the "Black People" and beat him for the ladies purse. I thought this was 2019? why is this person allowed to share any of his racist ideas on the web? The author doesn't even try to hid anything and also uses bad grammar. This "novel" or "Fanfiction" is ridiculous and should be reported.

Bro why have you stopped writing this novel it's amazing and shouldn't be dropped! There is so many different shows and movies you could go with to expand this story Ray Donovon/Sons of Anarchy/Weed/White Collar/Power/Breaking Bad/Bates Motel/Ozark/The Gentleman/Californication!!!!!!!!!!

Loved to see the dumb trio getting knocked down a peg,i hope neal stole it and can now use it to further his own knowledge. Not to mention that the time turner should have been neal's in the first place as he was the top student,not hermione. Also hope neal can put ron in his place,i mean if the idiot is gonna hate him either way,may as well humiliate him be done with it.

Not gonna lie. I’ve seen a similarly titled Fanfiction before (Completed) and it was awesome. From beginning to the end it had me by the collar and I have similar hopes for this one. Good luck and I’ll get to reading tomorrow after I sleep. Night!