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Ezukejyll
EzukejyllLv66yr
2019-02-16 07:17

This novel has shown itself as a really great idea of a Marvel fanfiction and would have been one of the best. Sadly the author is a racist person and does stereotypical situations from an asian point of view. In one chapter, he literally called an African American a "Black People" and used him in a situation where this person robbed a "White-collar person" of her brand-named purse. Then he further goes on to explain that more "White men" chased the "Black People" and beat him for the ladies purse. I thought this was 2019? why is this person allowed to share any of his racist ideas on the web? The author doesn't even try to hid anything and also uses bad grammar. This "novel" or "Fanfiction" is ridiculous and should be reported.

Marvel Invincible Talisman

yassinose
4.0
121 Chs

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doafihood
doafihoodLv5

probably because its based on a chinese fanfic, which i'm sure you know are pretty racist

5yr
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Kung_Lao
Kung_LaoLv1

Yeah, you both are just so so. Everybody have there own point of view, so just leave the guy alone, and keep your reviews in your hearts and souls 😒.

5yr
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Democratis
DemocratisLv11

Reveal spoiler

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GGMissFortune
GGMissFortuneLv6

trash "translation".... you give MC full Thor (odinforce) and Superman powers + several centuries of absorbing sunlight in alternate world but plot is still exactly the same... 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

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_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4

My second review here. I would like to correct that while this fanfic is indeed just the translation of a chinese fanfic in the beginning, but it gets very different as the story progresses. The original one is very boring as the M.C doesn't have chaos stone. That means he stays stupid and he only have the 12 spells all the way till the end. The author here changed many things and made this fanfic really great.

6yr
AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv13

I cant read this no more. The mc is so retarded and brainless. He keeps doing stupid decisions over and over again i just cant take it anymore. And the MC is supposed to be that way. So if you like retarded dumb MC's that keep making stupid decisions that make no sense. Other then maybe to piss off the readers. Then you will like this fanfic. But if you like even some what smart MC's that think before they act then this is not for you. I think this MC has some learning disabilities.

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_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4

The grammar is very bad, but this is a very good novel. I don't understand why someone wouldn't translate it. If there is anyone who can speak chinese and have some extra time to kill, I think many people would want to read it. On the other hand, I thank the translator for making the effort. I really appreciate it. Keep it up.

6yr
Dragonrage7
Dragonrage7Lv13

I love how the mc is smart now😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💯💯💯😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💯💯💯😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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Aagnus
AagnusLv14

I saw in the end of the synopsis you have an editor...... What kind of editor is it? Is he really doing he's job editing the grammars to improve it? I like the story of this novel but it really annoys me how bad the grammars is. Hope it improves... Really

6yr
ViolenceOfNumbers
ViolenceOfNumbersLv6

This started out rough for me to read & get into but... I'm glad I stayed with it. It's surprising that its intriguing to me! Acknowledgement of Novel Troupes Systems in the beginning was clever in a way. A very distinct way of showing how unique your novel concept truly is! Bringing two things that usually would never touch. Everyone is So use to Pb& j troupe concepts of novels that a peanut butter and banana sandwhich cought readers by surpise blew minds alittle, aleast from what I see of other reviews of this novel. Might not be for everyone but I like grew to like it! I remember jack adventures on Saturday mornings. I liked it then and never realized how OP those abilities could be in another world background, & in one person! Bravo for taking a chance. Not ignoring every plot hole questions as your story is progressing refreshing. Questions like, duality of heroics : kill or capture or how the mc is more comfortable with women after he wasn't a few chapters before, how he came to power, where that power is and came from. The pondering of such questions maybe too quickly solved almost as soon as they are brought up, but I like it. quickly establishing the MCs beliefs. Also aleast they are answered with a reasonable explanation(as far as reason goes in a novel). I like your Mc, endless potential for his power and character & story development. I Hope this gets better & continues to the natural ending & not another dropped novel on this site, cause for once I'm not entirely sure what that ending of this is!so many possibilities! That some how makes it a more interesting read. I guess I like peanut butter and banana sandwhichs now so...Good stuff. It's earned my power stones!

6yr
Dragonrage7
Dragonrage7Lv13

The story is and the mc has limitless potential.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Mafo
MafoLv5

Looks google translated from Chinese to me ........................................,,,...,,,,,,,........,,,,,,.....,,,,,,...,,,,(,,,,,,,).............:

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