king vegeta story

I demand more chapters, there has never been a king vegeta fanfic. chapters Please release I demand more chapters, there has never been a king vegeta fanfic. chapters Please release more

Written in English, yet not localized at all. So we get people being called by their family name when this is supposed to be in English using English language patterns. This is a small but annoying detail. The English itself is not bad and plenty serviceable. My only issue with the book is the m.c and their 1 personality, and 2 decisions. The author is afraid to make any changes and it shows. He pretends to be vegeta to keep the story as is. This is irredeemable in my eyes. There are dozens of options that could easily work ,yet he makes the decision to play the part of vegeta. It seems the author is unable to go off the rails of the original story and, is making excuses for why the m.c acts the way they do. The author already skipped over vegeta's childhood by putting him into a grown vegeta's body which is obviouslya red flag of them being unable to write anything original at all. My biggest complaint is vegeta not even attempting to contact king kai while he is in his space pod. He could easily make contact due to knowing that king kai is keeping on eye on their arrival ,and he could talk to king kai in private and explain the situation that way, allowing for a far greater flexibility in the story. The way the story is from the forst few chapters show how much the author is trying hard at making up reasons for things to happen as they do. If you read this be prepared to be annoyed by a dumb m.c

Garbage. - King Vegeta was scared of baby broly with 10,000 bp and when he finds this mc with 320k bp and he wants to control her? garbage plot. - Then instead of you know using brain and finding a way to stop it, MC screams at Vegeta that mc will kill him. Yeah it seems that a 3 year old attempted to write this fic because ever action that was taken was not even planned out.

The story was eh okay until at a point where he is taken as prisoner by king vegeta because he beat his son and is stronger than him. His power level is higher than king vegeta at age 3 but anyways he LETS HIS FAMILY BE TAKEN AND BEATEN IN FRONT IF HIM AND DIES NOTHING. Then he gains “false super saiyan” bullsh*t lol he doesn’t even need that to beat the king or his guards but hey I’m not the author who thinks of the right now and not the future or even the things that make sense. Would rate lower if the beginning wasn’t decent and would’ve rated higher if the author didn’t write chapter 11 I think? Doesn’t matter he ruined the entire story in one chapter bravo 👏

The story was interesting at first, but this took the term "pretending to be a pig" so seriously that the character became one (jokes aside). But really, after being "much" stronger than King Vegeta, Queen Vegeta, etc., he remains so submissive. In other words, the "pride" that his race should have doesn't exist. After all, enduring a little of that is fine, but for so long? It's just extreme masochism. But since so many people like this "plot," it's just my taste that's quite different.