looking for a beta reader fanfiction

Lord of Mysteries: Starting As A Reader

Lord of Mysteries fanfiction. The unexpected intervention of a real transmigrator, Ebner, would help Klein usher in a better ending. The Lord of the Mysteries would definitely be Klein, not the Celestial Worthy. The main character takes the Sequence pathway of a Reader. note: I'm only editing from MTL and post here so when I don't have a connection I can read it offline. the real author of this book is "Quick Return of the Named Fire"

ordinary_people · Book&Literature

Why Are You Looking At Me Like That?! (Uma Musume)

--+-- After being reborn into the world of horse girls, Dream Weaver had only planned to live an ordinary life. Yet, by some twist of fate, she found herself drawn into various scripted worlds, stepping onto the racetrack alongside many powerful horse girls. T.M. Opera O: 'You are the fated rival of the Conqueror!' Orfevre: 'A country bumpkin like you dares to stand before the glory of gold?!' Narita Brian: 'I will defeat you and claim my place on the highest stage!' Deep Impact: 'None shall stand before me—not even you!' After giving her all to overcome them in those scripted worlds and returning to reality, Dream Weaver couldn’t shake the feeling of being watched. A flash of purple-and-gold cloak disappearing outside the training ground, a glimpse of golden hair around a corner, the sound of hurried breathing from behind the library shelves… 'Just my imagination?' But whenever she turned around, there was nothing there. Little did she know, the moment she looked away— T.M. Opera O peeked out from behind a tree, her crown barely visible; Orfevre fumbled to put away her binoculars; Narita Brian’s coat got caught on a fire hydrant. In each other’s eyes, they saw the same comical panic, yet in the next instant, each reassumed their haughty expression. “If you’re just going to skulk around like some loser, then get off the stage! Only the victor deserves to stand by her side.” --+-- The Raws are: 赛马娘看我的眼神好可怕！ Feel free to support the author.

AspenTL · Video Games

Real Waifu Catalog: Warcraft Beta Tester

What happens after we die? Apparently we are shipped off to market to be reincarnated. In my case, I lucked out. I’ve been chosen to act as a beta tester for a whole artificial copy of the World of Warcraft, equipped with a moderately accelerated ability to learn magic and a collection of amulets that could condition their wearers to love me. No leveling, but I’ve got everything I need if I don’t do anything too stupid. Heavy on brainwashing, heavy on scheming, heavy on plot, modest on smut, and with far too many characters and far too many chapters, I proudly present this offering unto you, good reader. Based in the World of Warcraft and drawing heavily from SwiftRosenthal’s Waifu catalog, this is a harem building, mind control heavy, extremely nerdy story that I started on and it just got really out of hand.

Jerynboe · Video Games

Family - Reader/Lena Luthor

Various small stories about the reader's life as Lena's wife. Prompts by: Janafo28

SimpleTimes1 · Others

Certain Akuma {Cat Noir X Reader}

Y/N is akumatized into Stressora when schoolwork and her sibling gets to her. When she's defeated it's night so Cat Noir takes her home so she'll be safe, since Ladybug is about to detransform. On the way home Y/N tells Cat Noir how much she admires him. Flattered, he continues to visit and may develop feelings. But will he continue to pursue Ladybug, or will he catch a Certain Akuma? **Due to the fact that this account is hardly active now, I will be unable to reply to every comment, but I of course still really appreciate you guys for leaving them, and I'll read/maybe reply to some of them with my other account @ZeddiTheSecond. Thanks for reading!**

cowgirlzeddison · Others

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Alex_Lee_1342

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Everything is good but the grammar is iffy at some points. I've mentioned this via a review on chapter 100 on fanfiction.net already, but if you need a beta reader, please PM me (my main site is fanfiction.net). I'm willing to go over grammar (spelling, punctuation, etc) and syntax with you.

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So far a pretty good fic, but I greatly recommend a beta or a proof reader, as some bits of the story are quite cringe. This is why a beta or proof reader would be a good idea. To smoothen the edges.

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2019-09-04

The idea's good but the story pales when it comes to execution. The chapter's are small and the grammar needs an overhaul. There are a lot of O.C.s (Original Characters) and characters lack depth. I recommend the author to scrap this version of the story, then get a beta reader or editor and post it as a brand new fanfiction. Increase of word length and complexity along with a steady update schedule is the key to attracting more readers while keeping the existing reader base hungry for more. Till then, I'm going to stop reading this fanfiction. I hope that the author will consider my views. Yours sincerely, BasiliskFang.

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Hartman · Others

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Beta male mc. Not my cup of tea. Some issues with phasing. Felt it was bit jumpy from scene to scene. Average writing. If you as a reader like beta male mc then its worth a try.

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