Getting $10 Trillion Out Of Nowhere
Connor McDonald delivered food as his part-time job.
One day, he had to deliver food to a hotel infamous for being a sex hotel. When the room door opened, he couldn't believe his eyes. His girlfriend was half-naked, cuddling with a rich kid from their class.
"Well, now that you've found out, I guess it's time that you know," the rich kid scoffed. "Your girlfriend is dating me now.
"Connor, give up on me. You're an orphan and have no money. Even if you deliver food for the rest of your life, there's no way you can compete with him. You are not good enough for me. Let's break up," his girlfriend said.
Connor was utterly dumbfounded, wondering why God would inhibit poor people from being in a normal relationship. Just as he was wallowing in pain, his phone suddenly rang. He received an interesting text message.
[You have received 1,000,000,000.00 dollars in your account.]
"What the hell?" Connor exclaimed. "Who the heck just transferred 1 billion dollars to me?"
Silent Wind · Urban
Almost 200 chapters in and less then 10 days have passed. Where do you wanna take this story at this pace? Maybe instead of adding all the action in a single day, spread it out a bit? This has so much potential but you're slowly killing it with unnecessary padding.