bucky and shuri fanfic

In this last chapter Akeno and shuri are reunited and by the looks of it their personality is a a copy of each other just akeno having a M side and shuri pure S.

Just another dxd fanfic with a generic and overused plotline. The most common being the saving two kittens part and saving akeno and shuri. There's nothing that turns me away from dxd fanfics more than that

Hello, the story is good but there is a lot of mistakes at writing. First the quality of the whole story would be better with punctuation. For example : Shuri hello all is good and you By Shuri : Hello all is good and you ? Or "Hello all is good and you ?" (Shuri) If you put a few symbol like " x " /' x ' /[ x ] for dialog / though / system that would make the story more interesting to read. Right now it is not unreadable but difficult. That makes me want to skip a few passage. In a whole its good. But long text without a point symbol and Uppercase put a lot of trouble. At least there is return to the line and blank lines between two phrase. So it is not a lost case. Well good luck to you author, I wish you take a look to those few hints :) I will continue the reading of that fanfic don't give up.

Trash novel don’t read this fanfic. The MC knows that something bad will happen to Akeno and Shuri but did nothing to change their fate. He has the time chamber but he still allowed tragic event to happen to his love ones. Trash MC like the author of this book.

Mc in first ch : iam in a verse that is very unstable and there are many enemies Mc in ch 10: f u captain America hope you good dreams in ice Ahh bucky bucky you gotta get torture bc its in the plot sorry buddy Starks better be dead