an amish marketplace novel

Another World’s Versatile Crafting Master

MechanismUnknown

2021-04-09

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Re : Child again.

Fishball_22 · Urban

57 Chs

_Kaori_

2025-11-23

The MC tells others about Fugaku's Mangekyo Sharingan, even openly admitting it at a jounin meeting, and no one questions how he knows this information. Fugaku, present, acts as if his knowledge of the Mangekyo is common knowledge. In other words, he revealed his secret and says nothing. Furthermore, the Uchiha act like women in a marketplace, abandoning their characteristic cold demeanor; this feels more like a clichéd Chinese novel.

Naruto: F**king Makes Me Stronger

Alex_002 · Anime & Comics

406 Chs

Sigheti

2022-12-08

I promised sincerity, and consequently I have been quite honest with my feedback. Maybe even a bit too honest. I hope you are not dissuaded from writing after reading what I have written here. Keep in mind: it’s just one person’s opinion. The premise is promising, but it fails to fully capture my attention. Don’t get me wrong: the idea itself is interesting, but I’m not really inclined to keep reading. First off, I couldn’t even get past the first few chapters. Almost every paragraph has a grammatical error or an odd word choice. It really withholds your reader from continuing. I have corrected them in the first half, but after a while it just got to be too much. The characters themselves are a bit flat. I have nearly no information on them. I know the brother is older, likes to care for his sister, and doesn’t know how to handle money. I would like to see some more personality. As your reader I long for uniqueness and texture. You can show this in speech as well as behaviour. When it comes to their surroundings, I am in the dark. I know they’re at a marketplace. Alright, what kind of marketplace? What do they sell beside fruits? What’s the atmosphere like? What region are they in? What kind of people are there? We could just as well at a marketplace in 14th century France as at a marketplace in Babylon in 2000 v.Chr. Overall, I do believe this story has some real potential. Just keep writing and keep on practicing. I wish you all the best!

A Knight's Honour

EveZenier · Fantasy

9 Chs

Bla_Bla_2562

2023-06-04

I think that Mc should try to aim for the reform of society and create a kingdom as per the rules of the vedas that is based on the duties executed by a person their caste will be decided you can take reference of this type of kingdom building from another set of fictional Indian novel by AMISH the immortals of meluha in which the kingdom of meluha had laws which were based on the old vedas. I always felt that it was a shame that Karna didn't do anything for people who faced similar situation like him and we're exploited and made fun of . And since most of the kingdoms wouldn't want this the entire world will become his enemy and scheme against him. Fitting for the overpowered Mc.

I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata.

ForManaga · Fantasy

192 Chs

After she dies, she has a billion points of social cow X disease

Idiot + Little Master of Flirting + King of Comedians She Niu heard the meaning of the book and welcomed the Shuraba at the beginning. Wen Yi was speechless. Steeling one's heart, strengthening one's courage! To the male lead, she said arrogantly,"I'm your mother." The male lead was speechless. Wen Yi, who had a cheat, did not panic at all. Thus, everyone realized that the silent little transparent Wen Yi had changed. From the initial submissive to the bold mic, the little pushover who never dared to resist others had become a pretentious little devil. Everyone was speechless. Wen Yi smiled even more happily as she listened to the system notifications. She liked how they looked like they couldn't stand her but couldn't kill her. However, what was more shocking was that the school belle, who kept saying that she wanted to teach Wen Yi a lesson, forced Wen Yi into a corner under the watchful eyes of the public. She gritted her teeth and said in a low voice. " You like me, Zhuang Xiaoxiao. Do you feel wronged?" Everyone was speechless.

Five big bowls for a meal

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Big brother's white moonlight is soft and sweet

There was a transfer student, Shen Ting. She was really sweet. Not only was she good-looking, but her grades were also good. She had suddenly become the moonlight goddess of the entire school. It was also the most dazzling moon in Jiang Ye's heart. Jiang Ye, everyone said that he was crazy. He also thought that he was crazy, but so what? Anyway, it was another lousy life. Later on! He saw a shorty with a soft smile on her face. She was so sweet that he could feel it in his heart at a glance. He thought angrily that she must be seducing him! After that, every time Jiang Ye went to catch her, Shortie was not around. One day, Jiang Ye couldn't take it anymore and pushed Shen Ting against the wall."Are you avoiding me?" "No... no." "Then why are you not around every time I go to look for you?" "Hmm?" Shen Ting's face was flushed red. She was so anxious that she was about to cry."Because I have to study!" 10,000 Moe Points Critical Hit. Jiang Ye thought to himself,"This is really killing me. I'm really going crazy!" (Irascible academic slacker and soft national first love) Good student, look at me. I'm also working hard, so can you not be so afraid of me? For you, I am willing.

Miss Yu Qi

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The maxed out big shot became the top of the entertainment industry

Yan Zhixu, the number one blacklisted female celebrity on the Internet, a former member of a girl group. After debuting for two years, people gave him the nickname "Hot Search Reaper!" Unspoken rules? Bullying a former member? Snatching her best friend's boyfriend? It was on the trending searches and ridiculed by netizens. It was boycotted by the entire Internet and strongly requested to leave the entertainment industry! Xingyu Entertainment V: Let me introduce you, this is our Xingyu shareholder @ Yan Zhixu. #A famous actress surnamed Yan sitting in a million-dollar luxury car and staying in a mansion with a young rich man? Yan Jinxiu: Sorry, this is my sister @ Yan Zhixu #Walking hand in hand with the bank's vice president, suspected to be a big shot on the list? Yan Huaibi: Don't believe the rumors, this is my sister @ Yan Zhixu Little Lotus was regretful. The scumbag had turned into a bootlicker. Netizen: Boss, may I ask if you still need a leg pendant? -- One day, a well-known paparazzi took a photo of Yan Zhixu and a certain handsome man walking hand in hand. They were very close. Netizen: I heard that Big Boss Yan's family only has one elder brother and one younger brother, so this must be Big Boss Yan's father. Fu Shimo V: [Sorry, I'm her husband @ Yan Zhixu] [Female Lead's Hand Control & Male Lead's Leg Control] [Wild, dirty female celebrity; Almighty abstinent male doctor]

White Meow

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Help, I'm dressed like an interstellar big shot.

Crossing the galaxy, a scumbag brought a mistress to his door. He thought that he was a good-for-nothing, but in the end, the Host's alternate identities came one by one. She even forced herself to marry a husband? Scene 1:" Actually, I'm not your sister." After saying that, he looked at his sister seriously. Her sister gave her a hard slap on the head. Third Brother smacked her head. Her father gave her a heads-up. Her mother smacked her on the head. Big Brother wants her to produce evidence Scene 2: Let Go amp;amp;amp;quot; She hugged a man's thigh and said," I won't let go, I won't let go. I don't want to. If you dare to despise me, hmph, I'll call you molestation." amp;amp;amp;quot; &" Go to the doctor and wake up." amp;amp;amp;quot; &" Let me tell you, I'm very sober. You're not allowed to leave until you register your marriage with me today." amp;amp;amp;quot; The System said,[Host, wake up. We still have to brave the world and the sea of stars. Men will affect the speed at which you draw your sword. Wake up. We can raise fish, but don't let them take you away.]

Don't want to hear the snow

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Immortal Qin Han Tang, this history is very strange

The six countries were conquered, the four seas were pacified, and the Qin Immortal Emperor ended the chaotic world. When he sealed Mount Tai, the heavens summoned him, divine items descended from the heavens, and five-colored divine light illuminated thousands of people… After that, the world rose and the structure of the world changed drastically. During the change, demons were born, ghosts ran amok, and foreign countries beyond the sky wreaked havoc… The human race suffered in the cracks and fought back in despair. There were hundreds of philosophers who studied for generations to create techniques, establish sects, and suppress evil. There were geniuses who went through hardships to seize opportunities, establish power, and protect a region... There was also a generation of immortal emperor Qin who appeared out of nowhere. He used Mount Tai as his foundation to exterminate evil and drive away anomalies. After a thousand years, he swept across the eight wastelands and established an immortal dynasty in the world. He was called Immortal Qin and created a pure land for the human race. In the 3,000 years of the Great War, the Liu family's great ancestor killed the demon dragon and gathered heroes to rise. He built a divine court in the southwest of Xianqin, spread the divine dao to the world, established the supreme divine Han, replaced the heart of heaven with my heart, and transformed the heaven of Han… In the five thousand years of the Great War, Li Taizong's martial arts reached the heavens. He broke through the underworld, recruited heroes, sent troops from all directions, conquered seventy-two foreign countries, established the Holy Court in the southeast of the Shenhan Dynasty, spread martial arts all over the world, and opened the era of the Shengtang Dynasty... Ji Yuan looked at the ancient book in his hand, his expression very interesting.

Ink Feather for a Thousand Years

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