kakashi oc lemons fanfiction

This whole story is created to disrespect Kakashi's character. This is not the same gigachad Kakashi aka I'm not afraid you even if you jounin aka arrogant edgelord. I can't believe no one noticed a change in Kakashi's behavior. This OC character which may be called as Hotoki Kawakasi. Read at your own risk.

please don't drop. it's one of the very few Kakashi fanfiction and it's good

Concept is good. It is the real Kakashi who travelled across multiverse not some man who gained Kakashi template. Interaction between character is also good.(mostly) Average story. (I like it though) Repetitive lines. I personally don't like Shinto God concept being introduced. People might like it but not me because MCU is already too huge and adding this Shinto stuff is unnecessary. Although it was done to give Kakashi some new Mangekyo abilities, but nah Kamui is already pretty broken ability ( he has DMS) Some people think that in fanfictions MC shouldn't follow the plot and explo rethe world. So they can say that some plots are forced. But I like to read Fanfiction where OC follow the plots and I want to see the changes they can bring in the story. His and Odin's fight was kinda forced and out of Kakashi's usual behaviour. Kakashi would find any excuse to shrik from responsibility and Odin being a protector of nine realm is already a big excuse for Kakashi to leave asgaurd and report it to Fury, who wouldn't want to mess with Odin. Also I think if anyone transmigatted to MCU, ancient one would be First to notice it and want to observe this new variable as the protector of time stone and earth. Sometimes her meeting any OC should be justified but the interaction should be handled properly because people sometimes show her way too kind.

Currently at chapter 213, the story is very good, but there's a major inconsistency around chapters 160-190 concerning the ages of Kakashi, Obito, and the protagonist. When Kakashi first appeared, he was 10 years old, and Kakashi and Obito were the same age. Kakashi is 3 years younger than Renjiro, the protagonist's teammate. Then, suddenly, we see Obito as 13-14 years old, but the main character is only 6-9 months old. This error needs to be corrected, or it should be clarified whether the age difference between Kakashi and Obito is canon within this fanfiction. Thank you.

There is a big problem with the age of the main character. Kakashi created the Chidori when he was 12 years old during the 3rd Great Ninja War. Considering that Kakashi at the beginning of the Naruto manga was 26 years old and the main character of this fanfiction is 18 it means that your character created the chidori at the age of four.